1. 我的一天 My School Day
Today is Monday. I get up at 7 o'clock. I brush my teeth and wash my face. Then I eat breakfast with my family. My mom makes bread and milk. I go to school by school bus. School starts at 8:30. I have four classes in the morning. My favorite subject is English. At noon, I eat lunch in the school dining hall. The food is yummy. After lunch, I play with my friends. We play tag and jump rope. School ends at 3:30. I go home and do my homework. In the evening, I watch TV and go to bed at 9 o'clock.
今天是星期一。我七点起床，刷牙洗脸，然后和家人一起吃早餐。妈妈准备了面包和牛奶。我坐校车去上学，八点半开始上课。上午有四节课，我最喜欢的科目是英语。中午我在学校食堂吃午饭，食物很美味。午饭后我和朋友们一起玩，我们玩捉人游戏和跳绳。下午三点半放学，我回家写作业。晚上我看电视，九点上床睡觉。
✏️点评与重点：这篇作文使用了简单的时间顺序（Today is... I get up... Then... After...），非常适合小学生模仿。关键词汇如 get up, brush teeth, school bus, favorite subject, play with friends 都是日常高频词。建议学生掌握时间表达（at 7 o'clock, at 8:30）和动词短语（wash my face, do my homework）。
2. 我最喜欢的科目 My Favorite Subject
My name is Lucy. I am in Grade 4. I have many subjects at school, like math, Chinese, art, music, and PE. My favorite subject is music. I love to sing songs. Every Friday, we have a music class. Our teacher plays the piano and teaches us new songs. I also like to dance. In music class, we can clap our hands and move to the music. It is so much fun! I want to be a singer one day. I practice singing at home every day.
我叫露西，上四年级。我在学校有很多科目，比如数学、语文、美术、音乐和体育。我最喜欢的科目是音乐。我喜欢唱歌。每周五我们都有音乐课，老师会弹钢琴，教我们新歌。我也喜欢跳舞。在音乐课上，我们可以拍手，跟着音乐动起来，非常有趣！有一天我想成为一名歌手，所以我每天在家练习唱歌。
✏️点评与重点：这篇作文结构清晰：自我介绍 → 列举科目 → 点明最爱 → 原因说明 → 未来愿望。重点句型包括 My favorite subject is..., I love to..., We can..., It is so much fun! 学生可模仿此结构写“我最喜欢的运动/老师/季节”等话题。
3. 我的学校 My School
I study at a big and beautiful school. There are tall buildings, a big playground, and a nice library. I go to school from Monday to Friday. My classroom is on the second floor. It is clean and bright. We have desks, chairs, a blackboard, and a computer. Our teacher is kind and helpful. At school, I learn new things every day. I also make many friends. We eat lunch together and play games at break time. I love my school very much!
我在一所又大又漂亮的学校上学。学校里有高高的教学楼、一个大操场和一个漂亮的图书馆。我从星期一到星期五上学。我的教室在二楼，干净又明亮。我们有课桌、椅子、黑板和电脑。我们的老师很和蔼，也很乐于帮助人。在学校，我每天都能学到新知识，也交到了很多朋友。我们在一起吃午饭，课间一起玩游戏。我非常爱我的学校！
✏️点评与重点：本篇使用了描述性词汇如 big, beautiful, tall, clean, bright, kind，适合练习“地点描写”类作文。句型 There are..., My classroom is..., We have..., I learn..., I make friends 简洁实用。建议学生积累“学校设施”词汇：playground, library, classroom, computer, blackboard 等。
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