1. A Memorable Trip

Last summer, I went to Beijing with my parents. We visited the Great Wall. It was very long and old. We took many photos. I was tired but excited. I will never forget this trip.

🍭中文翻译:去年夏天,我和父母去了北京。我们参观了长城。它又长又古老。我们拍了很多照片。我虽然累了,但很兴奋。我永远不会忘记这次旅行。

✍️点评:使用‘Last summer’开头,明确时间;‘took many photos’是旅行常见活动,可引导孩子积累相关动词短语。重点词汇:last summer(去年夏天)、visited(参观)、took photos(拍照)、tired but excited(累但兴奋)。

2. My Trip to the Zoo

Last weekend, I went to the zoo with my class. We saw lions, elephants, and monkeys. The monkeys were very funny. They jumped and played. I fed the ducks with bread. We had a picnic under a big tree. It was a happy day.

🍭中文翻译:上周末,我和班级去了动物园。我们看到了狮子、大象和猴子。猴子非常有趣。它们跳来跳去,玩得很开心。我用面包喂了鸭子。我们在一棵大树下野餐。那是快乐的一天。

✍️点评:以班级活动为背景,贴近学生生活;使用简单动词如‘saw’、‘jumped’、‘fed’,适合小学生模仿。重点句型:We saw...(我们看到了……);They were very funny(它们非常有趣);We had a picnic(我们野餐了)。

3. A Trip to the Beach

This summer, I went to the beach with my family. The sun was bright. The sea was blue and clean. I swam in the water and built a sandcastle. My sister flew a kite. We ate ice cream and seafood. I loved the beach very much.

🍭中文翻译:今年夏天,我和家人去了海滩。阳光明媚。海水又蓝又干净。我在水里游泳,还堆了一个沙堡。我妹妹放了风筝。我们吃了冰淇淋和海鲜。我非常喜欢海滩。

✍️点评:描写感官体验(阳光、海水颜色),增强画面感;‘built a sandcastle’和‘flew a kite’是海滩活动的典型表达。重点词汇:beach(海滩)、swam(游泳)、sandcastle(沙堡)、ice cream(冰淇淋)。

 4. Visiting My Grandparents

Last winter holiday, I visited my grandparents in the countryside. Their house was small but warm. I helped feed the chickens and picked apples. We made dumplings together. I played with my little cousin. I felt very happy and relaxed.

🍭中文翻译:去年寒假,我去了乡下看望爷爷奶奶。他们的房子虽小但很温暖。我帮忙喂鸡,还摘了苹果。我们一起包了饺子。我和小表弟一起玩。我感到非常开心和放松。

✍️点评:主题温馨,适合表达亲情;动词短语‘helped feed’、‘picked apples’、‘made dumplings’体现具体活动,有助于丰富写作内容。重点句型:I helped...(我帮忙……);We made... together(我们一起做了……)。

 5. A School Trip to the Museum

Last Friday, our class went to the science museum. We saw robots, dinosaurs, and space ships. A robot could talk and dance. I learned many new things. We watched a 3D movie about the solar system. The trip was fun and educational.

🍭中文翻译:上周五,我们班去了科学博物馆。我们看到了机器人、恐龙和宇宙飞船。一个机器人会说话还会跳舞。我学到了很多新知识。我们看了一部关于太阳系的3D电影。这次旅行既有趣又有教育意义。

✍️点评:结合学习与娱乐,突出‘educational’(有教育意义的)这一关键词;‘learned new things’和‘watched a 3D movie’是实用表达。重点词汇:museum(博物馆)、robot(机器人)、solar system(太阳系)、educational(有教育意义的)。

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