1. A Great Summer Holiday
My summer holiday was very fun. I went to the beach with my family. We swam in the sea and built a sandcastle. I ate ice cream every day. I also read many books at home. I was happy every day.
🍭中文翻译：我的暑假很有趣。我和家人去了海滩。我们在海里游泳，还堆了沙堡。我每天都吃冰淇淋。我还在家读了很多书。我每天都很快乐。
✅点评：使用简单句型和常见动词（went, swam, built），适合初学者模仿；‘was very fun’虽语法不严谨，但符合小学生表达习惯，可引导进阶为‘was a lot of fun’。
✅重点词汇：beach（海滩），swam（游泳），sandcastle（沙堡），ice cream（冰淇淋）
2. My Summer Trip to the Countryside
This summer, I visited my grandma in the countryside. I helped her feed the chickens and pick vegetables. I saw many flowers and butterflies. At night, I looked at the stars. The air was fresh and the sky was clear. I loved the quiet life there.
🍭中文翻译：今年夏天，我去了乡下奶奶家。我帮她喂小鸡、摘蔬菜。我看到了很多花和蝴蝶。晚上，我仰望星空。空气很清新，天空很晴朗。我很喜欢那里的安静生活。
✅点评：使用一般过去时描述经历，动词如‘visited’、‘helped’、‘saw’结构清晰；‘looked at the stars’是优美表达，适合拓展自然主题词汇。
✅重点词汇：countryside（乡村），feed（喂），butterflies（蝴蝶），stars（星星），fresh air（清新的空气）
3. I Learned to Swim
Last summer, I couldn’t swim. This year, I took swimming lessons. I practiced every day. At first, I was afraid of water. But my teacher helped me. Now I can swim like a fish! I feel very proud of myself.
🍭中文翻译：去年夏天，我还不会游泳。今年，我参加了游泳课。我每天练习。一开始，我害怕水。但老师帮助了我。现在我能像鱼一样游泳了！我为自己感到骄傲。
✅点评：通过对比（last year vs this year）展现进步，使用‘feel proud of myself’表达情感，适合鼓励学生写成长类作文。
✅重点句型：Now I can...（现在我能……），I feel proud of myself（我为自己感到骄傲）
4. A Rainy Summer Day
One day this summer was rainy. I couldn’t go out to play. I stayed at home and drew pictures. I also played with my little sister. We made paper planes and had a race. The planes flew high! We laughed a lot. Even on a rainy day, I had fun.
🍭中文翻译：这个夏天有一天下雨了。我不能出去玩。我待在家里画画。我还和妹妹一起玩。我们做了纸飞机，还比赛了。飞机飞得很高！我们笑得很开心。即使在下雨天，我也玩得很愉快。
✅点评：描写天气变化带来的情绪转变，展现积极心态；‘had a race’、‘flew high’等短语生动有趣，适合模仿。
✅重点短语：stay at home（待在家里），paper planes（纸飞机），laughed a lot（笑得很多）
5. My Summer with Books
I didn’t travel this summer, but I had a great holiday. I read ten storybooks. My favorite was about a brave little dog. I imagined I was in the story. Reading makes me happy and smart. I want to read more next summer.
🍭中文翻译：这个夏天我没有去旅行，但我过了一个很棒的假期。我读了十本故事书。我最喜欢的是关于一只勇敢的小狗的故事。我想象自己也在故事里。读书让我快乐又聪明。明年夏天我还想读更多书。
✅点评：突出非传统假期活动，鼓励阅读主题写作；‘imagined I was in the story’富有想象力，适合培养创造性思维。
✅重点句型：Reading makes me...（读书让我……），I want to... next summer（明年夏天我想……）