1. 我的快乐周末
My Happy Weekend
I had a happy weekend. On Saturday morning, I played with my toys. In the afternoon, I went to the park with my family. We flew a kite and had a picnic. On Sunday, I watched cartoons and did my homework. I was tired but happy.
我的快乐周末
我度过了一个快乐的周末。星期六早上，我玩了玩具。下午，我和家人去了公园。我们放了风筝，还野餐了。星期天，我看了动画片并做了作业。我虽然累了，但是很开心。
✍️点评与重点：使用了简单句和常见动词（play, go, fly, watch, do），适合初学者。重点句型：I had a... weekend. 掌握“时间+活动”结构有助于组织写作。
2. 周末去动物园
Weekend at the Zoo
Last Saturday, I visited the zoo with my parents. I saw elephants, monkeys, and pandas. The monkeys were funny. They jumped from tree to tree. I took many photos. I also ate ice cream. It was a fun day!
周末去动物园
上个星期六，我和父母去了动物园。我看到了大象、猴子和熊猫。猴子很有趣，它们在树间跳来跳去。我拍了很多照片，还吃了冰淇淋。那是有趣的一天！
✍️点评与重点：使用过去时态（visited, saw, jumped）描述经历。关键词汇：visited, saw, funny, took photos。学会用形容词描述感受（fun, funny）提升表达力。
3. 和奶奶一起的周末
A Weekend with Grandma
This weekend, I stayed at my grandma’s house. She cooked noodles for me. We played cards and watched TV. Grandma told me a story at night. I liked staying with her. She is kind and warm.
和奶奶一起的周末
这个周末，我住在奶奶家。她给我煮了面条。我们一起玩纸牌、看电视。晚上，奶奶给我讲了一个故事。我喜欢和她待在一起。她很善良，也很温暖。
✍️点评与重点：情感表达自然，使用了家庭相关词汇（grandma, cooked, story, kind）。句型“I liked...”可用于表达喜好，适合模仿。
4. 下雨的周末
A Rainy Weekend
It rained all weekend. I stayed at home. I read a book and drew pictures. My mom made soup. In the evening, we played a board game. It was quiet but nice.
下雨的周末
整个周末都在下雨。我待在家里。我读了一本书，还画了画。妈妈做了汤。晚上，我们一起玩了桌游。虽然安静，但很温馨。
✍️点评与重点：学会描述天气（rainy, quiet）和室内活动。使用连词but表达转折（quiet but nice），增强句子逻辑性。
5. 帮忙做家务
Helping with Housework
On Saturday, I helped my mom clean the house. I swept the floor and washed the dishes. My mom said, 'Good job!' I felt proud. On Sunday, I watered the plants. I like helping my family.
帮忙做家务
星期六，我帮妈妈打扫房子。我扫了地，还洗了碗。妈妈说：“干得好！”我感到很自豪。星期天，我给植物浇了水。我喜欢帮助家人。
✍️点评与重点：动词短语丰富（swept the floor, washed the dishes, watered the plants）。情感词“proud”提升表达层次，适合学习正面情绪表达。
6. 去乡下过周末
A Weekend in the Countryside
Last weekend, I went to the countryside. I saw cows, chickens, and ducks. I fed the chickens with my uncle. I also picked apples. The air was fresh. I enjoyed the quiet life.
去乡下过周末
上个周末，我去了乡下。我看到了牛、鸡和鸭子。我和叔叔一起喂了鸡，还摘了苹果。空气很新鲜。我很喜欢那里的安静生活。
✍️点评与重点：使用动词过去式（went, saw, fed, picked）描述乡村活动。关键词：countryside, fresh air, fed chickens。适合扩展自然类词汇。
7. 周末学画画
Learning to Draw on Weekend
On Sunday, I went to an art class. I learned to draw a cat. I used crayons and colored it yellow. My teacher said it was cute. I want to draw more animals next time.
周末学画画
星期天，我去了美术课。我学会了画一只猫。我用蜡笔把它涂成黄色。老师说它很可爱。下次我想画更多的动物。
✍️点评与重点：使用“learned to...”句型表达学习经历。颜色词汇（yellow）和材料词汇（crayons）是重点，适合低年级学生掌握。
8. 和朋友一起玩
Playing with Friends
On Saturday, my friends came to my house. We played hide-and-seek and built a fort with blankets. We laughed a lot. My mom gave us cookies. It was the best day of the weekend!
和朋友一起玩
星期六，我的朋友们来我家玩。我们玩了捉迷藏，还用毯子搭了一个堡垒。我们笑得很开心。妈妈给了我们饼干。这是周末最棒的一天！
✍️点评与重点：使用并列动词（played, built, laughed）丰富动作描写。短语“a lot”和“the best day”增强情感表达，适合模仿写作。
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