1. My Weekend
On Saturday, I played football with my friends. On Sunday, I went to the park with my family. We had a picnic and flew a kite. I was tired but happy.
🍭中文翻译:星期六,我和朋友们踢了足球。星期天,我和家人去了公园。我们野餐并放了风筝。我虽然累了,但很开心。
✍️点评:使用‘On Saturday/Sunday’开头,清晰划分时间顺序,结构简单明了;‘tired but happy’是常见情感表达,适合描述活动后的感受。可拓展为‘excited but a little nervous’或‘busy but fun’等,丰富表达方式。重点句型:‘play + 运动’‘go to + 地点’‘have a picnic’‘fly a kite’。
2. My Happy Weekend
Last weekend, I visited my grandma. She cooked delicious noodles for me. In the afternoon, I watched a cartoon and read a storybook. I went to bed early at 8:30.
🍭中文翻译:上个周末,我去看望了奶奶。她给我煮了美味的面条。下午,我看了动画片,还读了一本故事书。我八点半就早早睡觉了。
✍️点评:使用‘Last weekend’开头,点明时间背景;动词‘visited’‘cooked’‘watched’‘read’‘went’均为小学阶段基础过去式,适合初学者模仿。重点搭配:‘cook delicious food’‘watch a cartoon’‘read a storybook’‘go to bed early’。注意‘read’的过去式是‘read’(发音不同)。
3. A Fun Weekend
On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I played games with my brother. On Sunday, we went to the zoo. I saw monkeys, elephants, and pandas. They were very cute!
🍭中文翻译:星期六上午,我打扫了我的房间。下午,我和弟弟一起玩游戏。星期天,我们去了动物园。我看到了猴子、大象和熊猫。它们非常可爱!
✍️点评:使用‘On Saturday morning’‘In the afternoon’‘On Sunday’等时间状语,使文章条理清晰。动词短语如‘clean my room’‘play games’‘go to the zoo’实用性强,适合日常表达。重点句型:‘I saw... They were...’ 描述所见事物并表达感受,可替换动物或形容词进行拓展。注意‘cute’是表达喜爱的高频词。
4. My Weekend at Home
I stayed at home last weekend. On Saturday, I helped my mom wash the dishes. On Sunday, I drew a picture and listened to music. I felt relaxed and had a good time.
🍭中文翻译:我上个周末待在家里。星期六,我帮妈妈洗了碗。星期天,我画了一幅画,还听了音乐。我感觉很放松,过得很愉快。
✍️点评:主题为‘居家周末’,拓展了不同场景的表达。‘helped my mom wash the dishes’是常见家务表达,动词‘help sb do sth’结构值得掌握。‘drew a picture’‘listened to music’为艺术类活动词汇。结尾‘felt relaxed and had a good time’情感表达自然,适合多种作文结尾使用。重点词汇:‘stay at home’‘help with chores’‘have a good time’。
