1. 我的春节 My Spring Festival
English:
My name is Xiaoming. I like the Spring Festival best. We clean the house and put up red couplets. My parents give me red envelopes. I get lucky money! We eat dumplings and watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. I am very happy.
中文翻译:
我叫小明。我最喜欢春节了。我们会打扫房子,贴上红对联。爸爸妈妈会给我红包,我收到压岁钱!我们吃饺子,一起看春节联欢晚会。我非常开心。
✍️点评与重点:
这篇作文使用了简单句和常见词汇,适合小学生模仿。重点词汇有:red envelopes(红包)、lucky money(压岁钱)、Spring Festival Gala(春节联欢晚会)。句子结构清晰,容易记忆。
2. 春节的一天 A Day During Spring Festival
English:
Today is the first day of the Spring Festival. I get up early. I wear new clothes. My grandma gives me a red envelope. We visit our relatives and say 'Happy New Year!' We eat fish, meat and vegetables. At night, we see beautiful fireworks. What a great day!
中文翻译:
今天是春节的第一天。我起得很早,穿上了新衣服。奶奶给了我一个红包。我们去拜访亲戚,说“新年快乐!”我们吃了鱼、肉和蔬菜。晚上,我们看到了美丽的烟花。真是美好的一天!
✍️点评与重点:
使用时间顺序描述节日活动,逻辑清晰。重点句型:“I get up early.”、“We visit...”、“We eat...”。关键词:fireworks(烟花)、relatives(亲戚),适合积累节日表达。
3. 我家的春节 Our Family’s Spring Festival
English:
Every year, our family has a big dinner on New Year’s Eve. We make dumplings together. My mom cooks soup. My dad watches the news. After dinner, we sit together and talk. We laugh and play games. I love my family and I love the Spring Festival.
中文翻译:
每年除夕,我们家都会吃一顿丰盛的晚餐。我们一起包饺子。妈妈煮汤,爸爸看新闻。晚饭后,我们坐在一起聊天,又笑又玩小游戏。我爱我的家人,也爱春节。
✍️点评与重点:
突出“家庭团聚”主题,情感真挚。使用“make...together”、“sit together”等短语体现温馨氛围。重点词汇:New Year’s Eve(除夕)、big dinner(年夜饭)。
4. 春节的习俗 Customs of the Spring Festival
English:
The Spring Festival is very important in China. People clean their houses before the festival. They put up red paper cuts and couplets. Red means good luck. Children get red envelopes. Families eat a big dinner. At night, people set off fireworks. Everyone says 'Happy New Year!'
中文翻译:
春节在中国非常重要。人们在节前打扫房子,贴上红剪纸和对联。红色代表好运。孩子们收到红包。家人们一起吃年夜饭。晚上,人们放烟花。大家互道“新年快乐”!
✍️点评与重点:
介绍传统习俗,内容全面。重点句型:“Red means good luck.”、“People set off fireworks.” 可用于文化类写作。关键词:paper cuts(剪纸)、good luck(好运)。

5. 我最喜欢的节日 My Favorite Festival
English:
My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. I like it because I don’t go to school. I can play with my cousins. We get red envelopes and eat delicious food. We watch cartoons and play games. I also like the red decorations. They make the house look warm and happy.
中文翻译:
我最喜欢的节日是春节。我喜欢春节,因为不用上学,还能和表兄弟姐妹一起玩。我们收到红包,吃到美味的食物。我们看动画片,玩游戏。我也喜欢红色的装饰,它们让家里看起来温暖又开心。
✍️点评与重点:
从个人感受出发,表达自然。使用“because”引导原因句,适合小学阶段语法训练。重点词:delicious food(美味的食物)、decorations(装饰)。
6. 看烟花 Watching Fireworks
English:
Last night, I watched fireworks with my family. The sky was dark. Suddenly, there was a loud 'bang'! Many colorful lights flew into the sky. Red, green, yellow and blue — they were so beautiful! I clapped my hands and jumped. I hope to see fireworks every year.
中文翻译:
昨晚,我和家人一起看了烟花。天空很黑,突然“砰”的一声!许多彩色的光飞向天空。红的、绿的、黄的、蓝的,太美了!我拍手跳跃。我希望每年都能看到烟花。
✍️点评与重点:
描写生动,使用感官词汇(sight: colorful lights; sound: bang)。重点句型:“There was a loud 'bang'!”、“I clapped my hands.” 适合描写类作文模仿。
7. 给爷爷奶奶拜年 Visiting Grandparents for New Year
English:
On New Year’s Day, we go to my grandparents’ home. I say 'Happy New Year, Grandpa and Grandma!' They give me a red envelope. We eat noodles for long life. My grandma tells me old stories. I draw a red lantern for them. We all smile and feel warm.
中文翻译:
大年初一,我们去爷爷奶奶家。我说:“爷爷奶奶,新年快乐!”他们给我一个红包。我们吃面条,寓意长寿。奶奶给我讲老故事。我为他们画了一个红灯笼。我们都微笑着,心里暖暖的。
✍️点评与重点:
体现传统文化与亲情。关键词:long life(长寿)、old stories(老故事)。句子简洁,情感细腻,适合表达家庭情感类作文。
8. 快乐的春节 A Happy Spring Festival
English:
This year’s Spring Festival is wonderful. I get many red envelopes. I eat jiaozi, niangao and tanghulu. My uncle teaches me to make paper cuts. We stick them on the windows. At night, we have a big dinner. I play with my little sister. I wish every day could be Spring Festival!
中文翻译:
今年的春节真棒。我收到了很多红包,吃了饺子、年糕和糖葫芦。叔叔教我剪窗花,我们把它们贴在窗户上。晚上,我们吃了丰盛的晚餐。我和妹妹一起玩耍。真希望每天都是春节啊!
✍️点评与重点:
内容丰富,包含多种春节元素。重点词汇:niangao(年糕)、tanghulu(糖葫芦)、paper cuts(剪纸)。使用“wish”表达愿望,提升作文情感层次。