1. 我的家 My Family
My family has four people. They are my father, my mother, my sister and me. My father is a teacher. He likes reading books. My mother is a nurse. She works in a hospital. My sister is ten years old. She is in Grade 5. I am seven years old. I am in Grade 2. We love each other very much.
我家有四口人。他们是我的爸爸、妈妈、姐姐和我。爸爸是老师,喜欢看书。妈妈是护士,在医院工作。姐姐十岁,上五年级。我七岁,上二年级。我们彼此非常相爱。
✍️点评与重点:使用简单句描述家庭成员,结构清晰。重点词汇:family, teacher, nurse, Grade。适合模仿写作“介绍家人”类作文。
2. 我的宠物 My Pet
I have a pet dog. His name is Bobby. He is white and small. He has two big eyes and a short tail. Bobby likes to run and play with me. Every day after school, I play with him in the garden. He is very cute and friendly. I love my pet dog very much.
我有一只宠物狗,它叫Bobby。它又白又小,有两只大眼睛和一条短尾巴。Bobby喜欢跑和跟我玩。每天放学后,我在花园里和它玩。它非常可爱又友好。我非常爱我的宠物狗。
✍️点评与重点:使用“has”描述外貌,用“likes”表达喜好。重点句型:He has... / He likes... / I love... 适合描述动物类作文。
3. 我的学校 My School
My school is big and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers. There is a playground, a library and a computer room. I go to school from Monday to Friday. My classroom is on the second floor. My teachers are kind. I like my school very much.
我的学校又大又漂亮。有很多树和花。有操场、图书馆和电脑室。我从星期一到星期五上学。我的教室在二楼。我的老师很和蔼。我非常喜欢我的学校。
✍️点评与重点:使用there is/are描述场所,地点词汇丰富。重点词:playground, library, classroom, kind。适合写“介绍学校”类作文。
4. 我最喜欢的季节 My Favorite Season
My favorite season is summer. In summer, the weather is hot and sunny. I can swim in the pool. I can eat ice cream. I also go to the beach with my family. We play in the sand and swim in the sea. Summer is fun and exciting!
我最喜欢的季节是夏天。夏天天气炎热,阳光明媚。我可以在游泳池里游泳,可以吃冰淇淋。我还和家人去海滩。我们在沙滩上玩,在海里游泳。夏天很有趣,也很令人兴奋!
✍️点评与重点:使用can表达能力,描述活动。关键词:swim, ice cream, beach, sunny。适合写“季节与活动”类作文。
5. 一次快乐的旅行 A Happy Trip
Last weekend, I went to the zoo with my parents. We saw many animals. I saw monkeys, elephants, tigers and pandas. The monkeys were very funny. They jumped from tree to tree. I took many photos. We had lunch at the zoo. It was a great day!
上个周末,我和父母去了动物园。我们看到了许多动物。我看到了猴子、大象、老虎和熊猫。猴子非常有趣,它们从一棵树跳到另一棵树。我拍了很多照片。我们在动物园吃了午饭。这是美好的一天!
✍️点评与重点:使用过去时(went, saw, took)描述经历。关键词:zoo, animals, photos, last weekend。适合写“记一次活动”类作文。

6. 我的好朋友 My Good Friend
My good friend is Lily. She is eight years old. She has long black hair and big eyes. She is kind and funny. We are in the same class. We play together at school. She likes drawing and singing. I like playing with her. She is my best friend.
我的好朋友是Lily。她八岁,有长长的黑发和大眼睛。她很善良,也很有趣。我们在同一个班级。我们在学校一起玩。她喜欢画画和唱歌。我喜欢和她一起玩。她是我最好的朋友。
✍️点评与重点:描述人物外貌和性格,使用and连接多个特点。重点句型:She has... / She likes... / We play together。适合写“介绍朋友”类作文。
7. 我的生日 My Birthday
My birthday is on June 5th. On that day, my family has a party for me. We have a birthday cake and sing 'Happy Birthday'. My parents give me gifts. I get toys and books. I am very happy. We eat dinner together. It is a special day for me.
我的生日是6月5日。那天,我的家人会为我举办派对。我们吃生日蛋糕,唱《生日快乐》歌。我的父母送我礼物。我收到玩具和书。我非常开心。我们一起吃晚饭。这是属于我的特别日子。
✍️点评与重点:使用on描述具体日期,动词短语丰富(have a party, sing, give, get)。关键词:birthday cake, gifts, special day。适合写“节日与庆祝”类作文。
8. 我喜欢的食物 My Favorite Food
My favorite food is pizza. It is round and delicious. It has cheese and tomatoes. I eat pizza on weekends. My mother makes pizza at home. Sometimes we buy it from a shop. I like to eat pizza with my family. It is my favorite meal.
我最喜欢的食物是披萨。它圆圆的,很好吃。上面有奶酪和番茄。我在周末吃披萨。我妈妈在家做披萨。有时候我们从店里买。我喜欢和家人一起吃披萨。这是我最喜欢的餐食。
✍️点评与重点:使用is和has描述食物特征,用like表达偏好。关键词:delicious, cheese, tomatoes, weekends。适合写“饮食偏好”类作文。
9. 今天天气怎么样? What's the Weather Like Today?
Today is sunny and warm. The sky is blue. The sun is shining. I wear a T-shirt and shorts. I go to the park with my friends. We fly kites and ride bikes. The weather is nice. I like sunny days.
今天阳光明媚,天气温暖。天空是蓝色的,阳光灿烂。我穿着T恤和短裤。我和朋友们去公园。我们放风筝、骑自行车。天气很好。我喜欢晴天。
✍️点评与重点:使用形容词描述天气(sunny, warm, blue),动词短语生动。关键词:weather, sunny, fly kites, ride bikes。适合写“天气与活动”类作文。
10. 我的梦想 My Dream
My dream is to be a doctor. Doctors help sick people. I want to make people healthy. I study hard at school. I read books about the body. I also watch science shows on TV. When I grow up, I will be a good doctor.
我的梦想是成为一名医生。医生帮助生病的人。我想让人们变得健康。我在学校努力学习。我读关于身体的书。我还看科学电视节目。当我长大后,我要成为一名好医生。
✍️点评与重点:使用want to和will表达愿望与未来计划。关键词:dream, doctor, help, grow up。适合写“我的理想”类作文,鼓励积极表达。