1. 我的暑假第一天
My summer holiday started on July 1st. I got up late and ate noodles for breakfast. Then I played with my dog in the garden. It was sunny and warm. I felt very happy.
我的暑假从7月1日开始了。我起得很晚，早餐吃了面条。然后我在花园里和我的小狗玩耍。天气晴朗温暖，我感到非常开心。
✅点评：使用了简单的时间表达（started on July 1st）和日常活动词汇（got up, ate, played），适合初学者模仿。
✅重点词汇：summer holiday, got up late, played with, felt happy
2. 去爷爷奶奶家
I visited my grandparents last week. They live in a small village. I fed the chickens and picked tomatoes. The air was fresh. I liked staying there.
上周我去看望了爷爷奶奶。他们住在一个小村庄里。我喂了小鸡，还摘了西红柿。空气很新鲜，我很喜欢待在那里。
✅点评：动词过去式使用准确（visited, lived, fed, picked），句型结构清晰。
✅重点词汇：visited, fed chickens, picked tomatoes, fresh air
3. 去海边玩
Last Sunday, I went to the beach with my family. We swam in the sea and built a sandcastle. I found a small shell. It was blue and beautiful.
上个星期天，我和家人去了海边。我们在海里游泳，还堆了一个沙堡。我找到了一个小贝壳，它是蓝色的，很漂亮。
✅点评：使用了“with my family”表达陪伴，动词swam, built, found都是小学必会过去式。
✅重点词汇：went to the beach, swam in the sea, built a sandcastle, found a shell
4. 看动画片的一天
It rained all day. I stayed at home and watched cartoons. My favorite cartoon is "Panda Town". I laughed a lot. I also ate some popcorn.
那天一直在下雨，我待在家里看动画片。我最喜欢的动画片是《熊猫镇》。我笑得很开心，还吃了一些爆米花。
✅点评：描述天气和室内活动，句型简单但完整，适合表达“因为下雨所以……”。
✅重点词汇：rained all day, stayed at home, watched cartoons, laughed a lot
5. 学游泳的经历
I learned to swim this summer. At first, I was afraid of water. But my dad helped me. Now I can swim ten meters! I feel proud.
这个夏天我学会了游泳。一开始我害怕水，但爸爸帮助了我。现在我能游十米了！我感到很自豪。
✅点评：使用了“at first”和“now”对比过去和现在，体现进步，情感表达自然。
✅重点词汇：learned to swim, afraid of water, helped me, feel proud
6. 和朋友一起骑自行车
Yesterday, I rode my bike with my best friend, Lily. We went to the park. We saw ducks and flowers. We took photos and had fun.
昨天，我和我最好的朋友莉莉一起骑自行车。我们去了公园，看到了鸭子和花。我们拍了照片，玩得很开心。
✅点评：使用“with my best friend”表达友谊，动词“rode, went, saw, took”均为基础过去式。
✅重点词汇：rode my bike, went to the park, saw ducks, had fun
7. 参加夏令营
I joined a summer camp for five days. I made new friends. We sang songs, played games, and slept in tents. I liked the campfire night best.
我参加了一个为期五天的夏令营。我交了新朋友。我们一起唱歌、玩游戏，还睡在帐篷里。我最喜欢篝火晚会那晚。
✅点评：使用“joined a summer camp”和“made new friends”表达社交经历，句式丰富。
✅重点词汇：joined a camp, made friends, played games, campfire night
8. 帮妈妈做家务
One morning, I helped my mom clean the house. I swept the floor and washed the dishes. Mom said I was a good helper. I felt happy.
一天早上，我帮妈妈打扫房间。我扫了地，还洗了碗。妈妈说我是个好帮手，我感到很开心。
✅点评：体现责任感，使用“helped”和“said”引导直接表扬，增强自信表达。
✅重点词汇：helped my mom, swept the floor, washed the dishes, good helper
9. 去动物园
Last weekend, I went to the zoo with my class. We saw monkeys, elephants, and pandas. The pandas were eating bamboo. They were so cute!
上个周末，我和班级一起去动物园。我们看到了猴子、大象和熊猫。熊猫正在吃竹子，它们太可爱了！
✅点评：使用“we saw...”列举动物，现在进行时“were eating”生动描绘场景。
✅重点词汇：went to the zoo, saw monkeys, eating bamboo, so cute
10. 暑假结束的感受
My summer holiday is almost over. I had a great time. I played, learned, and rested. I will remember this holiday forever.
我的暑假快结束了。我过得很愉快。我玩耍了，学习了，也休息了。我会永远记住这个假期。
✅点评：总结性段落，使用“had a great time”和“will remember”表达情感和记忆。
✅重点词汇：almost over, had a great time, played, learned, remember forever