【篇3】我最喜欢的动物——小狗
My Favorite Animal – The Dog
I have a dog. His name is Bobby. He is small and brown. He has big eyes and a short tail. Bobby is very cute and friendly. He likes to play with me every day. We run in the park and play with a ball. He can sit and shake hands. I love my dog very much. He is my best friend.
我最喜欢的动物——小狗
我有一只狗。他的名字叫Bobby。他个子小，是棕色的。他有大眼睛和短短的尾巴。Bobby非常可爱又友好。他喜欢每天和我一起玩。我们在公园里跑步，玩球。他会坐下，还会握手。我非常爱我的小狗。他是我最好的朋友。
✍️【点评与重点】
这篇作文使用了简单的句子结构，适合小学生模仿。关键词包括：name, cute, friendly, play, best friend。动词如like, play, run, sit等都是小学阶段必须掌握的基础词汇。文中使用了“can”表达能力（He can sit），是很好的语法点。建议学生记住“best friend”这个表达，用来描述亲密关系。
【篇2】动物园里的一天
A Day at the Zoo
Last Sunday, I went to the zoo with my family. We saw many animals. I saw a big elephant. It had a long nose. A monkey climbed the tree and made us laugh. The tiger was strong and walked slowly. I also saw a cute panda eating bamboo. We took many photos. I was very happy. I want to go to the zoo again next month.
动物园里的一天
上个星期天，我和家人去了动物园。我们看到了很多动物。我看到了一头大象，它有长长的鼻子。一只猴子爬上树，让我们笑了起来。老虎很强壮，慢慢走着。我还看到一只可爱的大熊猫在吃竹子。我们拍了很多照片。我非常开心。我想下个月再去一次动物园。
✍️【点评与重点】
这篇作文使用了过去时态（went, saw, took），适合练习“过去发生的事”这一写作主题。关键词有：zoo, elephant, monkey, tiger, panda, photos。注意“last Sunday”提示使用过去时。文中“made us laugh”和“eating bamboo”展示了动词的生动用法，建议学生积累这类短语，让作文更生动。
【篇3】我梦想的宠物
My Dream Pet
I want a pet rabbit. Its name is Snow. It is white and soft. It has long ears and red eyes. Snow likes to eat carrots and drink water. It jumps around the house and makes me smile. I will take good care of Snow. I will feed it every day and clean its home. A rabbit is a quiet and lovely pet. I hope I can have one soon.
我梦想的宠物
我想要一只宠物兔子。它的名字叫Snow。它是白色的，毛茸茸的。它有长长的耳朵和红红的眼睛。Snow喜欢吃胡萝卜和喝水。它在屋里跳来跳去，让我笑。我会好好照顾Snow。我会每天喂它，打扫它的家。兔子是一种安静又可爱的宠物。我希望很快就能拥有一只。
✍️【点评与重点】
本文使用了将来时（I will feed, I hope）和描述性形容词（white, soft, quiet, lovely），适合练习“愿望与计划”类作文。重点词汇包括：dream pet, take care of, feed, clean。注意“hope I can have one”是表达愿望的常用句型。建议学生学习“形容词 + and + 形容词”结构（如：quiet and lovely），使语言更丰富。
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