1. 我爱我的地球妈妈
Earth is like a mother to me. She gives me air, water, and food. I love her very much. I want to keep her clean and healthy. I turn off the lights when I leave the room. I use a cloth bag when I go shopping. I also pick up trash in the park. If everyone helps, our Earth will be more beautiful!
地球就像我的母亲。她给我空气、水和食物。我非常爱她。我想让她保持干净和健康。我离开房间时会关灯,去购物时用布袋,还在公园里捡垃圾。如果每个人都帮忙,我们的地球会变得更美丽!
✅点评:这篇作文使用了拟人手法,把地球比作“母亲”,容易引起小学生的共鸣。句式简单,动词如“turn off”“use”“pick up”都是小学阶段的基础词汇,适合初学者模仿。
✅重点词汇:Earth(地球),clean(干净的),trash(垃圾),cloth bag(布袋)
2. 节约用水,从我做起
Water is very important. We need water to drink, cook, and wash. But clean water is not endless. I try to save water every day. I turn off the tap when I brush my teeth. I take short showers. I also tell my family to save water. Saving water helps the Earth!
水非常重要。我们需要水来喝、做饭和洗东西。但干净的水不是用不完的。我每天都努力节约用水。刷牙时我会关掉水龙头,洗澡时间也很短。我还告诉家人要节约用水。节约用水就是在帮助地球!
✅点评:主题贴近生活,列举了日常节水行为,实用性强。使用了“not endless”(不是无限的)这样的表达,拓展了孩子的思维。
✅重点句型:"I try to..."(我努力……),"Saving water helps..."(节约用水有助于……)
3. 爱护小树苗,共建绿色家园
Trees are our friends. They give us clean air and shade. I planted a small tree in my garden last spring. I water it every week. I hope it grows tall and strong. I also draw pictures to tell others to protect trees. No trees, no life. Let’s plant more trees!
树是我们的朋友。它们给我们提供清新的空气和树荫。去年春天,我在花园里种了一棵小树。我每周都给它浇水。我希望它长得又高又壮。我还画画告诉别人要保护树木。没有树,就没有生命。让我们多种树吧!
✅点评:通过亲身经历(种树)表达环保行动,真实感人。结尾口号“Let’s plant more trees!”简洁有力,适合课堂展示。
✅重点表达:"plant a tree"(种树),"clean air"(清新空气),"shade"(树荫)
4. 垃圾分类,我能行
There are four kinds of trash: wet, dry, harmful, and recyclable. I learn this at school. Now I sort trash at home. I put paper and bottles in the recyclable bin. I keep batteries in a special box. Sorting trash helps the Earth stay clean. Everyone can do it!
垃圾有四种:湿垃圾、干垃圾、有害垃圾和可回收垃圾。我在学校学到了这些。现在我在家里进行垃圾分类。我把纸和瓶子放进可回收垃圾桶,把电池放在专门的盒子里。垃圾分类能让地球保持干净。每个人都可以做到!
✅点评:结合现实生活中的环保政策,内容具有教育意义。使用“sort trash”(分类垃圾)等实用短语,提升语言实用性。
✅重点短语:"recyclable bin"(可回收垃圾桶),"harmful trash"(有害垃圾),"special box"(专门的盒子)
5. 绿色出行,健康又环保
I go to school by bike. It is fun and good for the Earth. Cars make dirty air, but bikes do not. My dad walks to work sometimes. We also take the bus. Green travel helps reduce pollution. Let’s walk, bike, or take the bus!
我骑自行车上学。这很有趣,也对地球有好处。汽车会产生脏空气,但自行车不会。我爸爸有时走路去上班。我们也坐公交车。绿色出行有助于减少污染。让我们走路、骑车或坐公交吧!
✅点评:倡导绿色出行方式,语言生动活泼。“Cars make dirty air”用简单语言说明污染问题,适合小学生理解。
✅重点句型:"It is fun and good for..."(既有趣又对……有好处),"help reduce pollution"(有助于减少污染)
