1. My Summer Holiday
My summer holiday was fun. I got up late every day. I played with my friends in the park. We flew kites and rode bikes. I also visited my grandma. She cooked delicious food for me. I watched cartoons in the evening. I had a great time!
🍭中文翻译：
我的暑假很有趣。我每天起床都很晚。我和朋友们在公园里玩耍。我们放风筝、骑自行车。我还去看了奶奶。她给我做了美味的食物。晚上我看动画片。我玩得很开心！
✍️点评与重点：
使用了简单句和常见动词（play, fly, ride, watch），适合小学生模仿。重点词汇：fun, delicious, great time。句型结构清晰，便于记忆。
2. A Trip to the Beach
Last week, I went to the beach with my family. The sun was bright. We swam in the sea and built sandcastles. I found a small crab in the sand. We ate ice cream and took many photos. It was a hot but happy day.
🍭中文翻译：
上周，我和家人去了海滩。阳光明媚。我们在海里游泳，还堆了沙堡。我在沙子里发现了一只小螃蟹。我们吃了冰淇淋，拍了很多照片。那天很热，但很开心。
✍️点评与重点：
时间状语（last week）和地点词（beach, sea）是写作关键。动词短语如“built sandcastles”“took photos”可积累使用。重点词：bright, crab, happy day。
3. I Stayed at Home
This summer, I stayed at home. I read books and drew pictures. I helped my mom clean the house. I watered the plants and fed the cat. In the evening, I watched TV with my family. I felt relaxed and happy.
🍭中文翻译：
这个夏天，我待在家里。我读了书，也画了画。我帮妈妈打扫房子。我给植物浇水，还喂了小猫。晚上，我和家人一起看电视。我感到轻松又开心。
✍️点评与重点：
展示“居家生活”类作文写法。使用“helped”“watered”“fed”等动词过去式，体现语法点。重点短语：felt relaxed, stayed at home。
4. Visiting My Grandparents
I visited my grandparents in the countryside. They have a small farm. I fed the chickens and picked apples. I rode a small horse. The air was fresh and the sky was blue. I loved the quiet life there.
🍭中文翻译：
我去了乡下看望爷爷奶奶。他们有一个小农场。我喂了小鸡，摘了苹果，还骑了一匹小马。空气很清新，天空很蓝。我很喜欢那里的安静生活。
✍️点评与重点：
适合描写乡村体验。关键词汇：countryside, farm, fresh air。动词“fed, picked, rode”展示动作顺序，结构清晰。
5. My Summer Camp
I joined a summer camp. I made new friends. We sang songs, played games, and slept in tents. At night, we told stories by the fire. I learned to be brave and kind. I want to go again next year!
🍭中文翻译：
我参加了一个夏令营。我交了新朋友。我们一起唱歌、玩游戏，还睡在帐篷里。晚上，我们围着火堆讲故事。我学会了勇敢和友善。明年我还想参加！
✍️点评与重点：
使用“joined”“made”“slept”等过去式动词，适合练习时态。重点表达：told stories, by the fire, learned to be brave。
6. Watching the Stars
One night, I watched the stars with my dad. The sky was dark and full of light. My dad told me the names of some stars. I wished on a shooting star. It was quiet and beautiful. I will never forget that night.
🍭中文翻译：
一天晚上，我和爸爸一起看星星。天空漆黑，却布满星光。爸爸告诉我一些星星的名字。我对着一颗流星许了愿。那晚很安静，也很美丽。我永远不会忘记那个夜晚。
✍️点评与重点：
描写细腻，适合情感类作文。关键词：shooting star, wished, never forget。句型“it was...”可用于描述感受。
7. Learning to Swim
I learned to swim this summer. At first, I was scared. But my teacher helped me. I practiced every day. Now I can swim like a fish! I feel very proud of myself.
🍭中文翻译：
这个夏天我学会了游泳。一开始我很害怕。但老师帮助了我。我每天练习。现在我能像鱼一样游泳了！我为自己感到骄傲。
✍️点评与重点：
展示成长类主题。使用“at first”“now”体现时间变化。重点短语：feel proud of, practice every day，适合励志表达。
8. A Rainy Day
One day, it rained all day. I couldn’t go out. I stayed at home and read a book. Then I drew a picture of a rainbow. After the rain, the sun came out. I went outside and saw a real rainbow! It was amazing.
🍭中文翻译：
有一天，下了一整天的雨。我不能出门。我待在家里读了一本书。然后我画了一道彩虹。雨停后，太阳出来了。我出门看到了真正的彩虹！太神奇了。
✍️点评与重点：
描写天气变化，使用“all day”“after the rain”等时间词。重点词：amazing, rainbow, came out。适合练习“意外惊喜”类结尾。
9. My Favorite Day
My favorite day was the day we went to the zoo. I saw elephants, monkeys, and pandas. The pandas were so cute! I ate a hot dog and bought a toy bear. I took many photos. I want to go to the zoo again.
🍭中文翻译：
我最喜欢的一天是我们去动物园的那天。我看到了大象、猴子和熊猫。熊猫太可爱了！我吃了一个热狗，还买了一只玩具熊。我拍了很多照片。我还想再去动物园。
✍️点评与重点：
使用“favorite day”开头，吸引读者。列举动物名称和活动，内容丰富。重点词：cute, took photos, want to go again。
10. Helping Others
One day, I helped an old woman cross the street. She smiled and said “thank you.” I felt happy. I also helped my little brother with homework. My mom said I was a good boy. Helping others is good!
🍭中文翻译：
有一天，我帮助一位老奶奶过马路。她微笑着对我说“谢谢”。我感到很开心。我还帮弟弟做了作业。妈妈说我是个好孩子。帮助别人真好！
✍️点评与重点：
主题积极向上，适合品德类写作。使用直接引语（“thank you”）增强真实感。重点句型：felt happy, helping others is good。