1. My Summer Holiday
English:
I had a happy summer holiday. I went to the beach with my family. We swam in the sea and built a sandcastle. I ate ice cream every day. The weather was sunny and hot. I played with my little sister. We laughed a lot. I like summer because I don’t have to go to school.
中文翻译：
我度过了一个快乐的暑假。我和家人去了海滩。我们在海里游泳，还堆了一个沙堡。我每天吃冰淇淋。天气晴朗炎热。我和妹妹一起玩，我们笑得很开心。我喜欢夏天，因为我不用去上学。
✍️点评与重点：
这篇作文使用了基础词汇如“beach”（海滩）、“swam”（游泳）、“sandcastle”（沙堡），句型简单，适合初学者模仿。重点句型：I had... 和 I went to... 是描述假期活动的常用开头。
2. A Fun Day at the Park
English:
Last Sunday, I went to the park with my parents. We flew a kite and rode bikes. I saw many flowers and birds. I played on the swing and the slide. I was very happy. We had a picnic under a big tree. I ate a sandwich and drank juice. I want to go there again.
中文翻译：
上个星期天，我和父母去了公园。我们放了风筝，骑了自行车。我看到了很多花和鸟。我在秋千和滑梯上玩耍。我很开心。我们在一棵大树下野餐。我吃了三明治，喝了果汁。我想再去一次。
✍️点评与重点：
动词短语如“fly a kite”（放风筝）、“ride bikes”（骑自行车）是常见表达。注意过去式使用：went, saw, played。适合练习一般过去时。
3. I Visited My Grandparents
English:
During the summer, I visited my grandparents in the countryside. They have a small farm. I fed the chickens and picked apples. I helped water the vegetables. Grandma cooked delicious food. I slept in a big bed. I liked the clean air and quiet life. I want to visit them next summer.
中文翻译：
暑假期间，我去了乡下看望爷爷奶奶。他们有一个小农场。我喂了小鸡，摘了苹果，还帮忙给蔬菜浇水。奶奶做了美味的食物。我睡在一张大床上。我喜欢那里的清新空气和安静的生活。明年夏天我还想去看他们。
✍️点评与重点：
学习与农场相关的词汇：chickens（鸡）、apples（苹果）、vegetables（蔬菜）。句型“I helped...” 和 “Grandma cooked...” 展示了简单叙述能力。
4. My Trip to the Zoo
English:
I went to the zoo with my class. We saw lions, elephants, and monkeys. The monkeys were funny. They jumped and played. I took many photos. I bought a toy lion. The teacher said, 'Be quiet and stay together.' I learned a lot about animals. I had a great time.
中文翻译：
我和班级一起去动物园。我们看到了狮子、大象和猴子。猴子很有趣，它们跳来跳去地玩耍。我拍了很多照片，还买了一个玩具狮子。老师说：‘要安静，待在一起。’我学到了很多关于动物的知识。我玩得很开心。
✍️点评与重点：
动物名称是重点词汇。直接引语（'Be quiet...'）增加了真实感。适合练习“saw”、“took”、“bought”等规则与不规则动词过去式。
5. I Learned to Swim
English:
This summer, I learned to swim. I went to the swimming pool every afternoon. My dad taught me. At first, I was afraid. But I practiced every day. Now I can swim like a fish! I feel proud. Swimming is good for health. I will keep practicing.
中文翻译：
今年夏天，我学会了游泳。我每天下午都去游泳池。爸爸教我。一开始我很害怕，但我每天都练习。现在我能像鱼一样游泳了！我感到很自豪。游泳对健康有好处。我会继续练习。
✍️点评与重点：
情感表达如“I was afraid” 和 “I feel proud” 很自然。使用“can swim”展示能力变化，适合练习情态动词和现在时对比过去。
6. My Summer Reading
English:
I read five books in summer. My favorite book is about a brave dog. I read for one hour every day. I liked the pictures and stories. I told my friend about the book. We both want to be writers. Reading makes me happy and smart.
中文翻译：
我暑假读了五本书。我最喜欢的一本是关于一只勇敢的小狗的。我每天读一小时。我喜欢书中的图画和故事。我跟朋友讲了这本书。我们都想成为作家。阅读让我快乐又聪明。
✍️点评与重点：
学习表达喜好：“My favorite book is...”、“I liked...”。句型“Reading makes me...” 是高级表达，适合积累。
7. A Rainy Day at Home
English:
One day, it rained all day. I stayed at home. I played games with my brother. We watched a cartoon. I drew a picture of a rainbow. Mom made hot soup. I felt warm and cozy. Rainy days can be fun too!
中文翻译：
有一天，下了一整天的雨。我待在家里。我和弟弟玩游戏，看了一部动画片。我画了一幅彩虹的画。妈妈做了热汤。我感到温暖又舒适。下雨天也可以很有趣！
✍️点评与重点：
学习描述天气和室内活动。“felt warm and cozy” 是生动的情感描写。结尾句提升主题，值得模仿。
8. I Helped at Home
English:
I helped my mom every day. I cleaned my room and washed the dishes. I watered the plants. Mom said, 'You are a good boy/girl!' I felt happy. Helping at home is important. It makes our family life better.
中文翻译：
我每天帮妈妈做事。我打扫房间，洗碗，还给植物浇水。妈妈说：‘你真是个好孩子！’我感到很开心。在家帮忙很重要，它让我们的家庭生活更美好。
✍️点评与重点：
动词短语“cleaned”、“washed”、“watered” 是家务常用词。直接引语增强表达力。主题积极，适合价值观教育。
9. My Birthday in Summer
English:
My birthday is in summer. I had a small party at home. My friends came and brought gifts. We played games and ate cake. I blew out the candles and made a wish. I got a new bike! It was the best day of my summer.
中文翻译：
我的生日在夏天。我在家举办了一个小型派对。朋友们来了，还带来了礼物。我们一起玩游戏，吃蛋糕。我吹灭了蜡烛，许了愿。我得到了一辆新自行车！这是暑假里最棒的一天。
✍️点评与重点：
学习生日相关表达：“blew out the candles”、“made a wish”。情感高潮在最后一句，结构完整，适合模仿写作结构。
10. I Played with Friends
English:
I played with my friends every week. We played football, hide-and-seek, and tag. We laughed and ran. We shared snacks and toys. We promised to be friends forever. Playing with friends is the best part of summer.
中文翻译：
我每周都和朋友们一起玩。我们踢足球、玩捉迷藏和抓人游戏。我们笑着奔跑。我们分享零食和玩具。我们承诺永远做朋友。和朋友一起玩是夏天最棒的部分。
✍️点评与重点：
动词“played”重复使用，体现活动丰富。“shared” 和 “promised” 展示情感交流。结尾总结升华主题，值得学习。