1. 春天的美丽 Spring is Beautiful
English:
Spring is my favorite season. The weather gets warm and sunny. Flowers begin to bloom and trees grow new leaves. Birds sing in the trees every morning. I like to fly a kite in the park with my friends. Sometimes it rains, but the rain makes the grass green and fresh. Spring is full of life and hope.
中文翻译：
春天是我最喜欢的季节。天气变得温暖而晴朗。花儿开始开放，树木长出新叶子。每天早上鸟儿在树上唱歌。我喜欢和朋友们在公园里放风筝。有时候会下雨，但雨水让草地变得又绿又清新。春天充满了生机和希望。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用了基础词汇如 warm, sunny, bloom, fresh 等，适合小学生掌握。
✅ 描述了春天的典型特征：天气、植物、动物和活动。
✅ 句型简单，多用一般现在时，便于模仿写作。
📌 重点句型："I like to..." "...begin to..." "Spring is full of..."
2. 夏天的乐趣 Summer is Fun
English:
Summer is hot and bright. The sun shines every day. I wear a hat and a T-shirt to keep cool. I love to swim in the pool or eat ice cream with my family. Sometimes there are thunderstorms, but after the rain, the sky is blue again. I go on a trip every summer holiday. Summer makes me happy and active.
中文翻译：
夏天又热又明亮。太阳每天都照耀着。我戴着帽子、穿着T恤来保持凉爽。我喜欢在游泳池里游泳，或者和家人一起吃冰淇淋。有时候会有雷雨，但雨后天空又变蓝了。每年暑假我都会去旅行。夏天让我感到快乐和充满活力。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用了描述天气的词汇：hot, bright, thunderstorms, blue sky。
✅ 包含个人活动（swim, eat ice cream, go on a trip），增强作文真实感。
✅ 结尾用情感表达收尾，提升文章层次。
📌 重点句型："I love to..." "Sometimes there are..." "...makes me..."
3. 秋天的色彩 Autumn is Colorful
English:
Autumn is a beautiful season. The leaves turn red, yellow, and orange. The weather is cool and nice. I like to walk in the park and see the colorful leaves fall from the trees. Farmers are busy picking apples and pumpkins. I wear a sweater when it gets colder. I enjoy autumn because it is quiet and peaceful.
中文翻译：
秋天是一个美丽的季节。树叶变成了红色、黄色和橙色。天气凉爽宜人。我喜欢在公园里散步，看五颜六色的叶子从树上飘落。农民们正忙着采摘苹果和南瓜。天气变冷时，我会穿上毛衣。我喜欢秋天，因为它安静而平和。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用颜色词汇（red, yellow, orange）和感官描写，增强画面感。
✅ 引入“农民”和“收获”概念，拓展词汇范围。
✅ 使用形容词 quiet 和 peaceful 表达情感，提升语言层次。
📌 重点句型："The leaves turn..." "I like to..." "I enjoy... because..."
4. 冬天的寒冷 Winter is Cold
English:
Winter is cold and snowy. The sky is often grey, and the wind blows strongly. I wear a coat, gloves, and a scarf to stay warm. Sometimes it snows, and I make a snowman with my brother. We also go skating if the lake is frozen. I drink hot chocolate after playing outside. Winter is not my favorite season, but I still enjoy some winter fun.
中文翻译：
冬天又冷又下雪。天空常常是灰色的，风刮得很猛。我穿上大衣、手套和围巾来保暖。有时候下雪，我会和弟弟一起堆雪人。如果湖面结冰了，我们还会去滑冰。在外面玩过后，我会喝热巧克力。冬天不是我最喜欢的季节，但我仍然享受一些冬天的乐趣。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用感官词汇（cold, snowy, grey, wind blows）生动描绘冬天。
✅ 描述冬季活动：make a snowman, go skating, drink hot chocolate。
✅ 虽然表达“不是最喜欢”，但结尾积极，体现逻辑完整。
📌 重点句型："I wear... to stay warm" "Sometimes it snows" "I still enjoy..."