1. 我的暑假旅行 My Summer Vacation
My summer vacation was very fun. I went to the beach with my family. We swam in the sea and played in the sand. I built a big sandcastle. We ate ice cream every day. The sun was hot, but the water was cool. I saw many seashells on the beach. I took some home. I was happy every day.
我的暑假非常有趣。我和家人去了海滩。我们在海里游泳，在沙滩上玩耍。我堆了一个大沙堡。我们每天都吃冰淇淋。太阳很热，但海水很凉爽。我在沙滩上看到了许多贝壳，还带了一些回家。我每天都很快乐。
✍️点评与重点： 使用简单句和常见词汇，如“beach”（海滩）、“swam”（游泳）、“sandcastle”（沙堡）。适合小学生模仿。重点句型：“I went to...”、“I saw...”、“I was...”。
2. 一次难忘的春游 A Memorable Spring Outing
Last week, our class had a spring outing. We went to a farm. We saw cows, chickens, and ducks. I fed the chickens bread. We picked apples from the trees. The teacher gave us a picnic lunch. We played games and sang songs. I took many photos. I liked the farm very much.
上周，我们班去春游了。我们去了一个农场。我们看到了牛、鸡和鸭子。我用面包喂了鸡。我们从树上摘了苹果。老师给我们准备了野餐午餐。我们玩游戏、唱歌。我拍了很多照片。我非常喜欢这个农场。
✍️点评与重点： 使用过去时态描述活动，如“went”、“saw”、“picked”。关键词：“outing”（郊游）、“fed”（喂食）、“picnic”（野餐）。适合练习动词过去式。
3. 和家人一起去动物园 A Trip to the Zoo with My Family
On Saturday, I went to the zoo with my parents and my little brother. We saw lions, elephants, and monkeys. The monkeys were very funny. They jumped and played. I gave a banana to a monkey, but my mom said no. We had lunch near the panda house. The pandas were cute and slow. I want to go to the zoo again next month.
星期六，我和爸爸妈妈还有弟弟去了动物园。我们看到了狮子、大象和猴子。猴子非常有趣，它们跳来跳去地玩耍。我想给一只猴子香蕉，但妈妈不让。我们在熊猫馆附近吃了午饭。熊猫很可爱，动作也很慢。我想下个月再去一次动物园。
✍️点评与重点： 使用“saw”、“jumped”、“had”等动词过去式。重点词汇：“zoo”（动物园）、“funny”（有趣的）、“cute”（可爱的）。注意表达禁止行为：“my mom said no”。
4. 去乡下看望爷爷奶奶 Visiting Grandma and Grandpa in the Countryside
Last summer, I visited my grandma and grandpa in the countryside. Their house is small but nice. I helped them feed the ducks and pick vegetables. I rode a bike every morning. The air was fresh and clean. At night, we sat outside and looked at the stars. I learned many new things. I want to go back next holiday.
去年夏天，我去乡下看望了爷爷奶奶。他们的房子虽小但很温馨。我帮他们喂鸭子、摘蔬菜。每天早上我都会骑自行车。空气清新干净。晚上，我们坐在外面看星星。我学到了很多新东西。我希望下一个假期还能回去。
✍️点评与重点： 描述乡村生活，使用“helped”、“rode”、“sat”等动词。关键词：“countryside”（乡下）、“fresh air”（新鲜空气）、“looked at the stars”（看星星）。适合表达亲情与自然体验。
5. 一次短途家庭旅行 A Short Family Trip
Last weekend, my family took a short trip to a lake. We took a car and left in the morning. We brought food, water, and a tent. We went fishing and cooked food on a fire. I caught a small fish! We slept in the tent at night. It was dark and quiet. I heard frogs and crickets. I was a little scared but also excited. It was a great trip!
上个周末，我们全家去湖边短途旅行。我们开车早上出发，带了食物、水和帐篷。我们去钓鱼，还在火上做饭。我钓到了一条小鱼！晚上我们睡在帐篷里。外面又黑又安静，我听到了青蛙和蟋蟀的声音。我有点害怕，但也很兴奋。这是一次很棒的旅行！
✍️点评与重点： 使用时间顺序描述事件：“took a car”、“brought food”、“went fishing”、“slept in the tent”。关键词：“camping”（露营）、“fishing”（钓鱼）、“tent”（帐篷）。适合练习连贯叙述。