1. 我的暑假第一天
My Summer Holiday Day One
I woke up late on the first day of summer holiday. I did not go to school. I played with my dog in the garden. We ran and jumped. Then I ate ice cream. It was sweet and cold. I felt very happy.
我的暑假第一天
暑假的第一天我起得很晚。我没有去上学。我在花园里和我的小狗玩。我们跑啊跳啊。然后我吃了冰淇淋。它又甜又凉。我感到非常开心。
✍️点评与重点：使用简单句描述日常活动，如“woke up”“played”“ate”等动词过去式，适合小学生掌握基础时态。关键词：waked up（起床）、played（玩）、ice cream（冰淇淋）。
2. 去海边的一天
A Day at the Beach
Last week, I went to the beach with my family. The sun was bright. We swam in the sea and built a sandcastle. I found a small shell. It was pink and shiny. We ate fish and chips for lunch. I had a lot of fun.
去海边的一天
上周，我和家人去了海边。阳光明媚。我们在海里游泳，还堆了一个沙堡。我找到了一个小贝壳。它是粉红色的，闪闪发亮。我们午餐吃了鱼和薯条。我玩得很开心。
✍️点评与重点：使用“went”“swam”“built”等过去式动词，描述完整事件链。重点词汇：beach（海滩）、sandcastle（沙堡）、shell（贝壳），适合描写户外活动。
3. 拜访爷爷奶奶
Visiting Grandma and Grandpa
I visited my grandparents in the countryside. Their house is big and old. I helped grandma water the flowers. Grandpa told me a story. We ate dumplings together. I liked the fresh air and quiet life.
拜访爷爷奶奶
我去了乡下看望爷爷奶奶。他们的房子又大又旧。我帮奶奶给花浇水。爷爷给我讲了一个故事。我们一起吃了饺子。我喜欢那里的新鲜空气和安静的生活。
✍️点评与重点：使用“visited”“helped”“told”等动词，体现家庭温情。关键词：grandparents（祖父母）、countryside（乡村）、dumplings（饺子），适合表达亲情主题。
4. 学骑自行车
Learning to Ride a Bike
This summer, I learned to ride a bike. At first, I fell down many times. But I did not cry. My dad helped me. After three days, I could ride well. I felt proud of myself.
学骑自行车
今年夏天，我学会了骑自行车。一开始，我摔倒了很多次。但我没有哭。爸爸帮助了我。三天后，我就能骑得很好了。我为自己感到骄傲。
✍️点评与重点：使用“learned”“fell”“helped”等动词，展示成长过程。重点句型：“I felt proud of myself”（我为自己感到骄傲），适合表达成就感。
5. 参加夏令营
Going to Summer Camp
I went to a summer camp with my classmates. We sang songs, played games, and made new friends. At night, we sat around a fire and told stories. I learned to be brave and kind.
参加夏令营
我和同学们参加了夏令营。我们唱歌、玩游戏，还交了新朋友。晚上，我们围坐在火堆旁讲故事。我学会了勇敢和善良。
✍️点评与重点：使用并列动词“sang, played, made”增强节奏感。关键词：summer camp（夏令营）、brave（勇敢的）、kind（善良的），适合描写集体活动。
6. 看电影的一天
A Day at the Cinema
On a rainy day, I went to the cinema with my mom. We watched a cartoon about a talking dog. The movie was funny. I laughed a lot. We bought popcorn and juice. It was a great day.
看电影的一天
在一个下雨天，我和妈妈去了电影院。我们看了一部关于会说话的狗的动画片。电影很有趣。我笑了很多次。我们买了爆米花和果汁。那是很棒的一天。
✍️点评与重点：使用“watched”“laughed”“bought”等动词描述娱乐活动。关键词：cinema（电影院）、cartoon（动画片）、popcorn（爆米花），适合表达休闲生活。
7. 帮忙做家务
Helping with Housework
One morning, I helped my mom clean the house. I swept the floor and washed the dishes. It was hard work, but I felt happy. Mom said, 'You are a good boy!' I smiled.
帮忙做家务
一天早上，我帮妈妈打扫房子。我扫了地，还洗了碗。这很辛苦，但我感到开心。妈妈说：“你是个好孩子！”我笑了。
✍️点评与重点：使用“helped”“swept”“washed”等动词，体现责任感。重点句型：“You are a good boy!” 可用于表扬场景，适合家庭主题写作。
8. 去动物园
Visiting the Zoo
I went to the zoo with my class. We saw lions, monkeys, and elephants. The monkeys jumped and played. I took photos with my dad’s phone. I liked the elephant best. It had big ears and a long nose.
去动物园
我和班级去了动物园。我们看到了狮子、猴子和大象。猴子跳来跳去，玩得很开心。我用爸爸的手机拍了照片。我最喜欢大象。它有大耳朵和长鼻子。
✍️点评与重点：使用“saw”“jumped”“took”等动词描述所见所闻。关键词：zoo（动物园）、elephant（大象）、long nose（长鼻子），适合描写动物和观察。
9. 读一本有趣的书
Reading an Interesting Book
On a quiet day, I read a book about pirates. They sailed on a big ship and looked for treasure. I imagined I was on the ship too. The book was exciting. I finished it in two days.
读一本有趣的书
在一个安静的日子里，我读了一本关于海盗的书。他们在一艘大船上航行，寻找宝藏。我想象自己也在船上。这本书很刺激。我两天就读完了。
✍️点评与重点：使用“read”“sailed”“looked”等动词，结合想象力表达阅读乐趣。关键词：pirates（海盗）、treasure（宝藏）、exciting（刺激的），适合描写阅读体验。
10. 暑假的最后一天
The Last Day of Summer Holiday
Today is the last day of my summer holiday. I packed my school bag. I will go back to school tomorrow. I feel a little sad, but also excited. I miss my friends. I hope to learn more and have fun at school.
暑假的最后一天
今天是我的暑假最后一天。我收拾好了书包。明天我就要回学校了。我有点难过，但也感到兴奋。我想念我的朋友们。我希望在学校能学到更多，也玩得开心。
✍️点评与重点：使用“packed”“will go”“hope”等表达未来计划。关键词：last day（最后一天）、school bag（书包）、excited（兴奋的），适合结尾总结类作文。