1. 我的学校
My school is small but clean. There are twenty classrooms and a big playground. I like my school very much because the teachers are kind and the students are friendly.
I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have six classes every day. My favorite subject is English. I like to read books in the library.
After class, I play games with my friends. I love my school!
🍭中文翻译:
我的学校很小但是很干净。有二十间教室和一个大操场。我非常喜欢我的学校,因为老师很和蔼,同学们也很友好。
我从星期一到星期五上学。每天上六节课。我最喜欢的科目是英语。我喜欢在图书馆看书。
下课后,我和朋友们一起玩游戏。我爱我的学校!
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用简单句型,适合初学者模仿。
• 重点词汇:small, clean, kind, friendly, library, favorite subject。
• 句型结构:I like... because... 是表达原因的经典句型,建议掌握。
2. 我的学校
I study at a primary school. It has a garden and many trees. The flowers are beautiful in spring.
My classroom is on the second floor. It is bright and tidy. We clean it every day.
There is a computer room and a music room. I like singing in music class. School is fun!
🍭中文翻译:
我在一所小学读书。学校有一个花园和许多树。春天花儿很漂亮。
我的教室在二楼。它明亮又整洁。我们每天打扫教室。
学校有电脑室和音乐室。我喜欢在音乐课上唱歌。学校生活真有趣!
✍️点评与重点:
• 描述学校设施时使用 there is / there are 句型,适合基础写作。
• 重点词汇:garden, trees, bright, tidy, computer room, music room。
• 注意时态:一般现在时贯穿全文,表达习惯性动作。
3. 我的学校
My school is near my home. I walk to school every day. It takes ten minutes.
The school gate is red. We say 'Good morning' to our teachers every morning.
I have many friends at school. We eat lunch together in the dining hall. I love my school life!
🍭中文翻译:
我的学校离我家很近。我每天走路去上学,大约花十分钟。
学校的大门是红色的。每天早上我们向老师问好。
我在学校有很多朋友。我们一起去食堂吃午饭。我热爱我的校园生活!
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用表示距离和时间的表达:near my home, walk to school, takes ten minutes。
• 日常场景描写自然,适合模仿写“上学方式”主题。
• 重点句型:It takes + 时间 + to do sth. 表示“做某事花费多少时间”。
4. 我的学校
There are three buildings in my school: a teaching building, a library, and a gym.
I have PE class in the gym. We play basketball and run. I like sports very much.
The library is quiet. I read storybooks there. My school is big and nice.
🍭中文翻译:
我的学校有三栋楼:教学楼、图书馆和体育馆。
我在体育馆上体育课。我们打篮球、跑步。我非常喜欢运动。
图书馆很安静。我在那里读故事书。我的学校又大又漂亮。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用列举结构:There are three buildings: ... 清晰明了。
• 重点词汇:teaching building, gym, PE class, storybooks, quiet。
• 动词 use:play basketball, run, read 等动词短语是写作高频搭配。
5. 我的学校
Every morning, we do morning exercises in the playground. The sun is shining and the air is fresh.
Our head teacher is Miss Li. She teaches us Chinese. She is strict but kind.
After school, I join the art club. I draw pictures of my school. I am happy every day.
🍭中文翻译:
每天早上,我们在操场上做早操。阳光明媚,空气清新。
我们的班主任是李老师。她教我们语文。她很严格但也很和蔼。
放学后,我参加美术俱乐部。我画学校的图画。我每天都很快乐。
✍️点评与重点:
• 描写日常活动,增强作文真实感。
• 重点表达:do morning exercises, head teacher, join the club, strict but kind。
• 使用并列连词 but 表达转折,提升句子层次。
6. 我的学校
My school has a big canteen. We eat lunch at 12 o'clock. The food is delicious.
There are many clubs in my school: English club, music club, and sports club.
I am in the English club. We play games and sing songs. I learn a lot.
🍭中文翻译:
我的学校有一个大食堂。我们12点吃午饭。食物很美味。
学校有很多俱乐部:英语俱乐部、音乐俱乐部和体育俱乐部。
我在英语俱乐部。我们玩游戏、唱歌。我学到了很多东西。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用 there are 列举学校资源,结构清晰。
• 重点词汇:canteen, delicious, club, learn a lot。
• 动词搭配:play games, sing songs 是常见活动表达,适合积累。
7. 我的学校
I love my school because it is beautiful. There are flowers and grass everywhere.
My classmates and I help to water the plants on Fridays. We also pick up trash to keep the school clean.
Our school has a flag-raising ceremony every Monday. I feel proud when I see the flag.
🍭中文翻译:
我爱我的学校,因为它很漂亮。到处都有花和草。
我和同学们每周五一起给植物浇水。我们还捡垃圾,保持校园清洁。
我们学校每周一举行升旗仪式。当我看到国旗时,我感到很自豪。
✍️点评与重点:
• 情感表达自然,使用 because 引导原因。
• 重点短语:water the plants, pick up trash, flag-raising ceremony, feel proud。
• 体现责任感和集体意识,适合用于“校园生活”主题拓展。
8. 我的学校
My school starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 4 p.m. We have a 30-minute break at noon.
I like science class. We do fun experiments. The teacher shows us how things work.
At school, I learn to read, write, and count. I also learn to be a good person. I am thankful for my school.
🍭中文翻译:
我的学校早上8点开始上课,下午4点放学。中午有30分钟的休息时间。
我喜欢科学课。我们做有趣的实验。老师教我们事物是如何运作的。
在学校,我学会了读书、写字和算数。我还学会了如何做一个好人。我非常感谢我的学校。
✍️点评与重点:
• 时间表达清晰:starts at, ends at, break at noon。
• 重点词汇:experiment, count, thankful, be a good person。
• 升华主题:从学习知识到品德教育,体现作文深度,适合高年级学生参考。
