1. 我的快乐暑假
My Happy Summer Holiday
I had a happy summer holiday. I went to the park with my parents. We flew kites and played games. I ate ice cream and drank juice. I also read many books. I felt very happy.
我的快乐暑假
我度过了一个快乐的暑假。我和父母去了公园。我们放风筝、玩游戏。我吃了冰淇淋，喝了果汁。我还读了很多书。我感到非常开心。
✍️点评与重点：
使用了简单句型“I had...”、“I went...”、“I ate...”，适合初学者模仿。重点词汇：happy, park, fly kites, ice cream, read books。
2. 去海边的一天
A Day at the Beach
Last week, I went to the beach with my family. The sun was bright. We swam in the sea and built a sandcastle. I found a small shell. It was beautiful. We had lunch under a big umbrella. I like the beach very much.
去海边的一天
上周，我和家人去了海滩。阳光明媚。我们在海里游泳，还堆了一个沙堡。我找到了一个小贝壳，很漂亮。我们在一把大伞下吃了午饭。我非常喜欢海滩。
✍️点评与重点：
时间状语“Last week”引出过去事件，动词过去式使用正确（went, swam, built）。重点词汇：beach, sandcastle, shell, umbrella。
3. 我的暑假作业
My Summer Homework
I did my homework every morning. I wrote in my notebook and read English books. My mom helped me with math. After finishing homework, I played with my dog. I felt proud because I finished all my work.
我的暑假作业
我每天早上都做作业。我在笔记本上写字，读英语书。妈妈帮我辅导数学。写完作业后，我和我的狗玩。我感到很自豪，因为我完成了所有作业。
✍️点评与重点：
使用时间顺序表达（every morning, after finishing），体现条理性。重点词汇：homework, notebook, proud, help with。
4. 和爷爷奶奶一起的暑假
Summer with Grandparents
I stayed at my grandparents' house. They live in the countryside. I fed the chickens and watered the flowers. Grandma cooked delicious food. Grandpa told me stories. I loved my summer with them.
和爷爷奶奶一起的暑假
我住在爷爷奶奶家。他们住在乡下。我喂小鸡，给花浇水。奶奶做了美味的食物。爷爷给我讲故事。我很喜欢和他们一起的暑假。
✍️点评与重点：
描述乡村生活，使用动词短语如“fed the chickens”、“watered the flowers”生动具体。重点词汇：countryside, feed, water, delicious, stories。
5. 参加夏令营
My Summer Camp
I joined a summer camp for one week. I made new friends. We played games, sang songs, and drew pictures. At night, we watched the stars. I learned to be brave and kind.
参加夏令营
我参加了一个为期一周的夏令营。我交了新朋友。我们一起玩游戏、唱歌、画画。晚上，我们看星星。我学会了勇敢和友善。
✍️点评与重点：
使用“joined”、“made”、“played”等过去式动词，展示活动经历。重点词汇：summer camp, make friends, brave, kind, watch stars。
6. 看电影的暑假
A Movie Summer
One day, I went to the cinema with my sister. We watched a cartoon. The movie was funny and exciting. We laughed a lot. We also ate popcorn and candy. It was a great day!
看电影的暑假
有一天，我和妹妹去了电影院。我们看了一部动画片。电影很有趣又刺激。我们笑得很开心。我们还吃了爆米花和糖果。真是美好的一天！
✍️点评与重点：
描述娱乐活动，使用形容词“funny”、“exciting”增强表达。重点词汇：cinema, cartoon, popcorn, candy, laugh。
7. 去动物园
A Trip to the Zoo
My class went to the zoo. We saw lions, elephants, and monkeys. The monkeys were very funny. They jumped and played. I took many photos. I want to go again next summer.
去动物园
我们班去了动物园。我们看到了狮子、大象和猴子。猴子非常有趣。它们跳来跳去，玩得很开心。我拍了很多照片。我想明年夏天再去一次。
✍️点评与重点：
使用“saw”、“jumped”、“took”等动词过去式，结构清晰。重点词汇：zoo, lions, elephants, monkeys, take photos。
8. 学游泳的夏天
Learning to Swim
This summer, I learned to swim. I went to the pool every afternoon. My teacher helped me. At first, I was afraid. But now I can swim well. I feel strong and happy.
学游泳的夏天
今年夏天，我学会了游泳。我每天下午都去游泳池。老师帮助我。一开始我很害怕。但现在我能游得很好了。我感到强壮又开心。
✍️点评与重点：
展示成长过程，使用对比“at first... but now...”增强逻辑性。重点词汇：learn to swim, pool, afraid, strong, teacher.
9. 和朋友一起玩
Playing with Friends
I played with my friends every day. We rode bikes, played hide-and-seek, and drew pictures. We shared toys and snacks. We always had fun together. I love my friends.
和朋友一起玩
我每天都和朋友们一起玩。我们骑自行车、玩捉迷藏、画画。我们分享玩具和零食。我们总是玩得很开心。我爱我的朋友们。
✍️点评与重点：
使用并列动词短语（rode, played, drew）和“shared”表达互动。重点词汇：ride bikes, hide-and-seek, share, snacks, have fun。
10. 家庭旅行
A Family Trip
We took a trip to a small town. We stayed in a hotel. We visited a museum and a big park. I bought a toy as a gift. The trip was fun and relaxing. I want to travel again soon.
家庭旅行
我们去一个小镇旅行了。我们住在一家旅馆里。我们参观了博物馆和一个大公园。我买了一个玩具作为礼物。这次旅行既有趣又放松。我希望很快能再次旅行。
✍️点评与重点：
使用“took a trip”、“visited”、“bought”等动词描述行程。重点词汇：trip, hotel, museum, gift, relaxing。