1. My School Day（我的学校生活）
English:
I go to school from Monday to Friday. I get up at 7 o'clock every morning. I eat breakfast and then walk to school. My school starts at 8:30. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. My favorite subject is English because it is fun. I play with my friends at break time. We laugh and run in the playground. I go home at 4:00. I like my school day!
中文翻译：
我从星期一到星期五去上学。每天早上七点起床。我吃早餐，然后走路去学校。学校八点半开始上课。上午有四节课，下午有两节。我最喜欢的科目是英语，因为它很有趣。课间我和朋友们一起玩，我们在操场上又笑又跑。我四点回家。我喜欢我的学校生活！
✍️点评与重点：
这篇作文结构清晰，使用了简单的时间顺序（from Monday to Friday, at 7 o'clock, at 8:30, at 4:00）。关键词汇如 get up, eat breakfast, walk to school, favorite subject, play with friends 都是小学阶段的高频词汇，适合模仿。重点句型：I like... because... 表达喜好和原因。
2. My Best Friend at School（我在学校最好的朋友）
English:
My best friend at school is Lily. She sits next to me in class. She is kind and always helps me. We play together at lunchtime. We like to draw and sing songs. Lily is good at math, and I am good at English. We help each other with homework. I am happy to have a friend like her.
中文翻译：
我在学校最好的朋友是莉莉。她在班上坐在我旁边。她很友善，总是帮助我。午饭时间我们一起玩。我们喜欢画画和唱歌。莉莉数学很好，我英语很好。我们互相帮助做作业。我很高兴有她这样的朋友。
✍️点评与重点：
作文围绕“朋友”展开，使用了描述性格（kind）、行为（helps me, play together）和能力（good at）的词汇。句型 I am good at... 和 We help each other... 是表达能力和互助的常用句式，值得掌握。
3. My Favorite Subject（我最喜欢的科目）
English:
My favorite subject is English. I learn new words every day. My teacher tells fun stories and we play games in class. I like to read English books and sing English songs. I can talk to my friends in English now. I want to learn more because English is important. I work hard in English class.
中文翻译：
我最喜欢的科目是英语。我每天学习新单词。老师讲有趣的故事，我们在课堂上玩游戏。我喜欢读英语书和唱英语歌。现在我能用英语和朋友交谈了。我想学更多，因为英语很重要。我在英语课上很努力。
✍️点评与重点：
文章聚焦“喜欢的科目”，使用了 learn new words, tell stories, play games, read books, sing songs 等动词短语，生动具体。表达愿望的句型 I want to... 和表达努力的 I work hard... 是写作加分点。
4. A Fun School Trip（一次有趣的学校旅行）
English:
Last week, our class went on a school trip to the zoo. We took the bus and arrived at 9:00. We saw lions, elephants, and monkeys. The monkeys were the funniest! We took many photos and ate lunch under a big tree. My teacher told jokes and we all laughed. We came back to school at 3:00. It was a fun and exciting day!
中文翻译：
上周，我们班去动物园进行了一次学校旅行。我们坐公交车，九点到达。我们看到了狮子、大象和猴子。猴子最有趣了！我们拍了很多照片，在一棵大树下吃午饭。老师讲了笑话，我们都笑了。我们三点回到了学校。这是既有趣又令人兴奋的一天！
✍️点评与重点：
使用过去时态（went, took, saw, ate, told）描述一次经历，是记叙文的基础。关键词 went on a trip, took the bus, saw animals, took photos, told jokes 可用于类似主题。注意时间顺序和连接词（and, then）的使用。
5. My School Library（我的学校图书馆）
English:
My school has a small but nice library. It is quiet and clean. There are many books about animals, science, and stories. I go to the library every Wednesday. I like to read picture books and borrow storybooks. The librarian is friendly. She helps me find books. I love reading in the library because it is peaceful and fun.
中文翻译：
我的学校有一个小而漂亮的图书馆。它安静又干净。有许多关于动物、科学和故事的书。我每星期三都去图书馆。我喜欢看图画书，也喜欢借故事书。图书管理员很友好，她帮我找书。我喜欢在图书馆读书，因为那里安静又有趣。
✍️点评与重点：
描写地点类作文的典范。使用形容词 small, nice, quiet, clean, friendly, peaceful 增强描述力。句型 I like to... 和 I love... 表达喜好，搭配具体活动（read, borrow, find）使内容更真实。适合学习如何描写公共场所。