1. 我的快乐暑假
My Happy Summer Holiday
I had a happy summer holiday. I went to the beach with my family. We swam in the sea and built a sandcastle. I also ate ice cream every day. I played with my little sister. We laughed a lot. I like summer because it is fun and sunny.
我的快乐暑假
我度过了一个快乐的暑假。我和家人去了海边。我们在海里游泳，还堆了一个沙堡。我每天还吃了冰淇淋。我和妹妹一起玩，我们笑得很开心。我喜欢夏天，因为它有趣又阳光明媚。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用简单句型，适合小学生模仿。
✅ 高频词汇：happy, beach, swim, ice cream, fun。
✅ 重点句型：“I like... because...” 表达原因，可用于多种作文。
2. 暑假里的一天
A Day in My Summer Holiday
Today is sunny. I get up at 8 o'clock. I eat breakfast with my mom. Then I go to the park. I ride my bike and play football with my friends. In the afternoon, I read a book and draw a picture. I go to bed at 9 o'clock. I am very happy today.
暑假里的一天
今天天气晴朗。我八点起床。我和妈妈一起吃早餐。然后我去公园。我骑自行车，和朋友们踢足球。下午，我读了一本书，还画了一幅画。我九点上床睡觉。今天我很开心。
点评与重点：
✅ 按时间顺序描述，结构清晰。
✅ 使用动词短语：get up, eat breakfast, go to, ride, play, read, draw。
✅ 适合练习“日常活动”类表达。
3. 我和爷爷奶奶的暑假
My Summer Holiday with Grandparents
I stayed at my grandparents' house this summer. They live in the countryside. I fed the chickens and watered the flowers. Grandma cooked delicious food. Grandpa told me stories at night. I learned a lot and had a great time.
我和爷爷奶奶的暑假
今年夏天我住在爷爷奶奶家。他们住在乡下。我喂了小鸡，还给花浇水。奶奶做了美味的食物。爷爷晚上给我讲故事。我学到了很多，也玩得很开心。
点评与重点：
✅ 描述乡村生活，拓展词汇：countryside, feed, water, delicious。
✅ 使用过去时态（stayed, lived, fed, cooked）是写作关键。
✅ 适合练习“家庭”和“过去经历”主题。
4. 暑假旅行记
My Summer Trip
Last week, I went to a small town with my parents. We took the train. The town is quiet and beautiful. We visited a lake and saw many ducks. I took many photos. We stayed there for three days. I want to go again next year.
暑假旅行记
上周，我和父母去了一个小镇。我们坐火车去的。小镇安静又美丽。我们参观了一个湖，看到了很多鸭子。我拍了很多照片。我们在那里待了三天。明年我还想去一次。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用时间状语：last week, for three days。
✅ 动词过去式：went, took, visited, saw, stayed。
✅ “I want to...” 表达愿望，适合结尾句。
5. 我的暑假学习生活
My Summer Study Life
I did not only play in summer. I also studied every day. I read English books and wrote words. I practiced math problems. My mom helped me. I feel I am getting better. Learning is fun too!
我的暑假学习生活
我在暑假不只是玩。我每天都学习。我读英语书，写单词。我还练习数学题。妈妈帮助我。我觉得我进步了。学习也很有趣！
点评与重点：
✅ 展现积极态度，适合学校作文要求。
✅ 使用连接词：not only... but also...（本篇简化为“not only... also...”）。
✅ 关键词：study, practice, help, better, fun。
6. 暑假里的小动物
The Little Animals in My Summer Holiday
One day, I saw a small dog in the park. It was lost. I gave it water and food. I asked people if it was their dog. A girl came and said it was hers. She was very happy. I felt proud.
暑假里的小动物
有一天，我在公园里看到一只小狗。它迷路了。我给它水和食物。我问别人是不是他们的狗。一个女孩走来说是她的。她非常开心。我感到很自豪。
点评与重点：
✅ 故事性强，适合练习“帮助他人”主题。
✅ 使用过去时态描述事件发展。
✅ “I felt proud” 是表达情感的好句型。
7. 我的暑假阅读时光
My Summer Reading Time
I read five books in summer. My favorite book is about a brave cat. The cat helps his friends. I read for one hour every day. Reading helps me learn new words. I love reading!
我的暑假阅读时光
我暑假读了五本书。我最喜欢的一本是关于一只勇敢的猫。这只猫帮助他的朋友们。我每天读一小时。阅读帮助我学习新单词。我爱阅读！
点评与重点：
✅ 数字表达：five books, one hour。
✅ 使用定语从句简化版：“book about...”
✅ 强调阅读的好处，适合写“爱好”类作文。
8. 暑假学游泳
Learning to Swim in Summer
I learned to swim this summer. At first, I was afraid of water. But my teacher was kind. She taught me to float and kick. Now I can swim across the pool! I am very happy and proud.
暑假学游泳
我今年夏天学会了游泳。一开始，我害怕水。但我的老师很和蔼。她教我漂浮和踢水。现在我能游过整个泳池了！我非常开心和自豪。
点评与重点：
✅ 描述学习过程，使用“at first, but, now”结构。
✅ 动作词汇：float, kick, swim across。
✅ 情感变化：afraid → happy and proud，增强表达力。
9. 暑假看电影
Watching Movies in Summer
I watched three movies in summer. One was about space. One was about animals. My favorite was a funny movie. I laughed a lot. I watched them with my family. It was a good time.
暑假看电影
我暑假看了三部电影。一部是关于太空的。一部是关于动物的。我最喜欢的是一个有趣的电影。我笑得很开心。我和家人一起看的。那是一段美好的时光。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用“one was..., one was..., my favorite was...”结构，条理清晰。
✅ 电影类型词汇：space, animals, funny。
✅ 适合练习“喜欢的事物”表达。
10. 我的暑假总结
My Summer Holiday Summary
My summer holiday was great. I played, studied, and traveled. I made new friends and learned new things. I ate delicious food and saw beautiful places. I will remember this summer forever.
我的暑假总结
我的暑假很棒。我玩了，学习了，也旅行了。我交了新朋友，学到了新东西。我吃了美味的食物，看到了美丽的地方。我会永远记住这个夏天。
点评与重点：
✅ 总结式结尾，适合多种作文收尾。
✅ 使用并列结构：played, studied, traveled；made, learned, ate, saw。
✅ “I will remember...” 表达情感，增强感染力。