1. 孩子们在公园玩耍
English:
The sun is shining. Three children are playing in the park. Tom is flying a red kite. Lucy is riding a blue bike. Mike is playing with a yellow ball. They are very happy. The trees are green and the flowers are beautiful.
中文翻译：
阳光明媚。三个孩子正在公园里玩耍。汤姆在放一只红色的风筝。露西在骑一辆蓝色的自行车。迈克在玩一个黄色的球。他们非常开心。树是绿色的，花儿很漂亮。
✍️点评与重点：
本段使用了简单的现在进行时（is/are + doing）描述正在发生的动作，适合初学者。关键词如 flying, riding, playing 是小学阶段核心动词。注意颜色词汇（red, blue, yellow）和形容词（happy, beautiful）的运用，增强画面感。
2. 小明的生日派对
English:
Today is Xiaoming’s birthday. His friends are at his home. There is a big cake on the table. It has six candles. Xiaoming is wearing a red cap. They are singing “Happy Birthday”. Everyone is laughing and clapping.
中文翻译：
今天是小明的生日。他的朋友们都在他家。桌上有一个大蛋糕，上面有六根蜡烛。小明戴着一顶红色的帽子。他们正在唱“生日快乐”歌。每个人都在笑，还在鼓掌。
✍️点评与重点：
本段聚焦“生日”主题，使用了常见表达如 “Happy Birthday” 和 “candles”。句型 “There is…” 引导存在句，是写作常用结构。动词 laughing 和 clapping 展示情绪，适合模仿。
3. 下雨天上学
English:
It is raining today. Anna is going to school with her mom. She is wearing a yellow raincoat and red boots. She has a blue umbrella. The sky is gray. But Anna is not sad. She likes jumping in puddles.
中文翻译：
今天在下雨。安娜正和妈妈一起去上学。她穿着一件黄色雨衣和红色雨靴。她有一把蓝色的雨伞。天空是灰色的。但安娜并不难过。她喜欢跳水坑。
✍️点评与重点：
本段使用 “It is raining” 开头，自然引出天气主题。raincoat, boots, umbrella 是与雨天相关的高频词汇。注意 “likes + doing” 结构，表达个人喜好，简单实用。
4. 动物园的一天
English:
Tom and his dad go to the zoo. They see many animals. The elephant is big and gray. The monkey is climbing a tree. The panda is eating bamboo. The lion is sleeping. Tom takes a photo of the tiger. He is very excited.
中文翻译：
汤姆和他爸爸去了动物园。他们看到了许多动物。大象又大又灰。猴子正在爬树。熊猫在吃竹子。狮子在睡觉。汤姆拍了一张老虎的照片。他非常兴奋。
✍️点评与重点：
本段使用 “see many animals” 引出主题，每句描述一种动物及其动作，结构清晰。动词如 climbing, eating, sleeping 都是现在进行时，适合看图写话中“正在做什么”的表达。
5. 家庭晚餐时间
English:
It is 6 p.m. The family is having dinner. Dad is eating noodles. Mom is drinking soup. Lily is eating rice and chicken. The dog is sitting under the table. They are all very happy.
中文翻译：
现在是下午6点。一家人正在吃晚饭。爸爸在吃面条。妈妈在喝汤。莉莉在吃米饭和鸡肉。小狗坐在桌子下面。他们都非常开心。
✍️点评与重点：
时间表达 “It is 6 p.m.” 是基础句型。使用 “having dinner” 描述正在进行的活动。注意家庭成员与食物的搭配，如 noodles, soup, rice and chicken，贴近生活，易于记忆。
6. 春天的花园
English:
Spring is here. The sun is warm. Many flowers are blooming. Bees are flying around. A little girl is picking a pink flower. A boy is drawing a picture of a butterfly. Birds are singing in the trees. It is a beautiful day.
中文翻译：
春天来了。阳光温暖。许多花儿正在开放。蜜蜂在周围飞舞。一个小女孩正在摘一朵粉色的花。一个男孩正在画一只蝴蝶。鸟儿在树上唱歌。这是美好的一天。
✍️点评与重点：
本段描绘春天景象，使用多个现在进行时句子，增强动态感。blooming, flying, singing 等动词生动形象。关键词 spring, warm, beautiful 可用于描写类作文开头。
7. 在教室里上课
English:
The students are in the classroom. Miss Li is teaching English. Tom is reading a book. Lucy is writing in her notebook. Mike is listening carefully. The blackboard has some words on it. Everyone is working hard.
中文翻译：
学生们在教室里。李老师正在教英语。汤姆在读一本书。露西在笔记本上写字。迈克在认真听讲。黑板上写着一些单词。每个人都在努力学习。
✍️点评与重点：
本段适合“学校生活”主题。teaching, reading, writing, listening 展示课堂活动，动词丰富。注意 “working hard” 表达学习态度，是积极评价常用语。