小学英语作文1：我的一天
My Day
Today is a sunny day. I get up at seven o'clock. I brush my teeth and wash my face. Then I eat breakfast with my family. I go to school by bus. I have four classes in the morning. At noon, I eat lunch at school. After school, I play football with my friends. I go home at five. I do my homework and watch TV. I go to bed at nine.
我的一天
今天是晴朗的一天。我七点起床。我刷牙洗脸。然后我和家人一起吃早餐。我坐公交车去上学。上午我有四节课。中午，我在学校吃午饭。放学后，我和朋友们踢足球。我五点回家。我做作业，然后看电视。我九点睡觉。
✍️点评与重点：这篇作文结构清晰，使用了简单的时间顺序（from morning to night）。重点词汇包括：get up, brush teeth, go to school, play football, do homework。适合初学者模仿。注意时间表达方式，如 at seven o'clock, at five。
小学英语作文2：我的一天
My Happy Day
It is Saturday today. I don't go to school. I get up at eight. I have breakfast at half past eight. Then I clean my room. My mother helps me. In the afternoon, I go to the park with my dad. We fly a kite and take photos. I am very happy. In the evening, we eat noodles together. After dinner, I read a storybook. I go to bed at ten.
我快乐的一天
今天是星期六。我不用去上学。我八点起床。八点半吃早餐。然后我打扫我的房间。妈妈帮我。下午，我和爸爸去公园。我们放风筝，还拍照。我非常开心。晚上，我们一起吃面条。晚饭后，我读了一本故事书。我十点睡觉。
✍️点评与重点：这篇作文加入了情感表达（I am very happy），适合表达周末生活。重点句型：It is... today, I don't go to school, We fly a kite。学习使用“half past”表示时间（half past eight = 8:30）。
小学英语作文3：我的一天
A Busy Day
Today I am very busy. I wake up at six thirty. I take a shower and get dressed. I eat a quick breakfast. I go to school early because we have a test. I study hard in class. At lunchtime, I eat rice and chicken. After school, I go to piano class. I practice for one hour. Then I go home and have dinner. I finish my homework before bedtime. I am tired but happy.
忙碌的一天
今天我非常忙。我六点半起床。我洗澡，穿好衣服。我快速吃了早餐。我早早去上学，因为我们要考试。我在课堂上认真学习。午饭时间，我吃了米饭和鸡肉。放学后，我去上钢琴课。我练习了一个小时。然后我回家吃晚饭。我在睡觉前完成了作业。我虽然累，但是很开心。
✍️点评与重点：使用了“busy”作为主题词，突出“忙碌”。重点词汇：wake up, take a shower, get dressed, practice, finish homework。注意连词 but 的使用（tired but happy），表达转折情感。
小学英语作文4：我的一天
My Weekend Day
Today is Sunday. I get up late. I have breakfast at nine. Then I help my mom make the bed and clean the house. In the afternoon, I go to the library with my sister. I read a book about animals. It is very interesting. We eat ice cream after reading. In the evening, I watch a cartoon with my family. I go to bed at half past nine. I like Sundays very much.
我的周末一天
今天是星期天。我起得比较晚。我九点吃早餐。然后我帮妈妈铺床和打扫房子。下午，我和妹妹去图书馆。我读了一本关于动物的书。它非常有趣。读完书后我们吃了冰淇淋。晚上，我和家人一起看动画片。我九点半睡觉。我非常喜欢星期天。
✍️点评与重点：主题为周末生活，使用“I like Sundays very much”表达情感。重点短语：get up late, help my mom, make the bed, read a book about...。学习“half past nine”表示9:30。句式简单但内容丰富。
小学英语作文5：我的一天
My School Day
Today is Monday. I get up at seven. I wear my school uniform. I eat bread and drink milk for breakfast. I walk to school with my friend. We talk and laugh. I have English, math, art, and PE today. My favorite class is PE. We play games and run. After school, I go to the bookstore and buy a notebook. I go home and eat dinner with my family. I go to bed early because I have school tomorrow.
我的上学日
今天是星期一。我七点起床。我穿上校服。早餐我吃面包，喝牛奶。我和朋友一起走路去上学。我们边走边聊天、笑。今天我有英语、数学、美术和体育课。我最喜欢的课是体育。我们玩游戏，还跑步。放学后，我去书店买了一个笔记本。我回家和家人一起吃晚饭。我早早睡觉，因为明天还要上学。
✍️点评与重点：聚焦“上学日”主题，使用 school uniform, favorite class, walk to school 等校园相关词汇。学习列举课程的表达方式（I have English, math...）。结尾句体现逻辑思维（go to bed early because...）。