1. 我最喜欢的动物：小狗
My Favorite Animal: The Dog
Dogs are my favorite animals. They are cute and friendly. I have a small dog at home. His name is Bobby. He has brown fur and big eyes. He likes to run and play with me. Every day after school, I play with Bobby in the yard. He barks when he is happy. I love my dog very much because he is my best friend.
我最喜欢的动物：小狗
狗是我最喜欢的动物。它们又可爱又友好。我家有一只小狗，它的名字叫波比。它有棕色的毛和大大的眼睛。它喜欢跑和跟我一起玩。每天放学后，我都在院子里和波比玩。它开心的时候会汪汪叫。我非常爱我的小狗，因为它是我的最好的朋友。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用简单句型，适合小学生模仿。
✅ 高频词汇：dog, cute, friendly, play, happy, best friend。
✅ 可替换名字（如Bobby）和颜色（如brown）来个性化作文。
2. 可爱的猫咪
The Cute Cat
Cats are very cute animals. My aunt has a white cat. Her name is Snow. She is soft and quiet. She likes to sleep on the sofa. Sometimes she plays with a small ball. She does not like loud noises. I like to pet her because she is very gentle. Cats are good pets for families.
可爱的猫咪
猫是非常可爱的动物。我姑姑有一只白色的猫，它叫雪球。它毛茸茸的，很安静。它喜欢在沙发上睡觉。有时候它会玩一个小球。它不喜欢吵闹的声音。我喜欢抚摸它，因为它很温顺。猫是适合家庭的好宠物。
点评与重点：
✅ 描述性词汇丰富：cute, soft, quiet, gentle。
✅ 使用第三人称单数动词（likes, plays, does not like）练习语法。
✅ 可用于“宠物”或“家庭动物”类话题作文。
3. 大象真有趣
The Elephant is Interesting
The elephant is a big and strong animal. It lives in Africa and Asia. It has a long nose called a trunk. The trunk can pick up water and food. Elephants live in groups and help each other. They eat leaves, grass, and fruit. I saw an elephant at the zoo. It was drinking water with its trunk. I think elephants are very smart and kind.
大象真有趣
大象是一种又大又强壮的动物。它生活在非洲和亚洲。它有一个长长的鼻子，叫做象鼻。象鼻可以拿起水和食物。大象成群生活，互相帮助。它们吃树叶、草和水果。我在动物园里看到过大象，它正用鼻子喝水。我觉得大象非常聪明又善良。
点评与重点：
✅ 引入新词汇：trunk（象鼻），leaves（树叶），groups（群体）。
✅ 使用一般现在时描述事实，适合科普类写作。
✅ 适合“动物园”或“野生动物”主题。
4. 我在动物园看到的长颈鹿
The Giraffe I Saw at the Zoo
Last Sunday, I went to the zoo with my family. I saw a tall giraffe. It had a long neck and long legs. Its body has brown and yellow spots. The giraffe was eating leaves from a tall tree. It did not make loud sounds. I learned that giraffes are the tallest animals in the world. I was very happy to see it.
我在动物园看到的长颈鹿
上个星期天，我和家人去了动物园。我看到一只高高的长颈鹿。它有长长的脖子和长腿。它的身上有棕色和黄色的斑点。长颈鹿正在吃一棵高树上的叶子。它没有发出很大的声音。我了解到长颈鹿是世界上最高的动物。看到它我非常开心。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用过去时描述一次经历（went, saw, was eating）。
✅ 关键词：tall, long neck, spots, leaves, the tallest animal。
✅ 适合“参观动物园”或“难忘的一天”类作文。
5. 小兔子乖乖
The Cute Little Rabbit
Rabbits are small and soft animals. I saw a white rabbit at my friend’s house. It had long ears and red eyes. It liked to eat carrots and cabbage. When it ran, it jumped very high. I wanted to hold it, but it was a little shy. Rabbits are quiet and clean pets. I hope to have one someday.
小兔子乖乖
兔子是又小又柔软的动物。我在朋友家看到一只白色的兔子。它有长长的耳朵和红色的眼睛。它喜欢吃胡萝卜和卷心菜。它跑的时候跳得很高。我想抱它，但它有点害羞。兔子是安静又干净的宠物。我希望有一天能拥有一只。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用感官描写：soft, red eyes, jumped high。
✅ 表达愿望的句型：I hope to have one someday。
✅ 可拓展为“我想要的宠物”主题作文。