1. 我的学校
My school is big and beautiful. There are many trees and flowers. I like my classroom because it is clean and bright. We have lessons from Monday to Friday. I love my teachers and friends.
我的学校又大又漂亮。有许多树木和花朵。我喜欢我的教室，因为它干净又明亮。我们从星期一到星期五上课。我爱我的老师和朋友们。
✍️点评：句子简洁，使用基础词汇如 big, beautiful, clean, bright，适合初学者模仿。重点句型：I like... / I love... 表达喜爱之情。
2. 我的学校
I go to school by bus every day. My school has a library, a playground, and a computer room. We play football after class. I am happy at school.
我每天坐公交车去上学。我的学校有图书馆、操场和电脑室。我们课后踢足球。我在学校很开心。
✍️点评：介绍上学方式和学校设施，使用 by bus 和 There is/are 结构。重点词汇：library, playground, computer room，可替换为其他设施。
3. 我的学校
My school is near my home. It has three buildings. We have English, maths, and art classes. My favourite subject is English. I can read and write in English now.
我的学校离我家很近。它有三栋楼。我们上英语、数学和美术课。我最喜欢的科目是英语。我现在能用英语读和写。
✍️点评：使用方位词 near my home 和 favourite subject 展示个人偏好。重点句型：My favourite subject is... 可用于其他话题。
4. 我的学校
There are thirty students in my class. Our teacher is kind. We listen to the teacher carefully. We also sing songs and play games in class. School life is fun.
我们班有三十名学生。我们的老师很和蔼。我们认真听老师讲课。我们也在课堂上唱歌和玩游戏。学校生活很有趣。
✍️点评：描述班级情况和课堂活动，使用 kind, carefully, fun 等情感词汇。重点句型：There are... / We also... 丰富表达。
5. 我的学校
I get up at seven o'clock. I go to school at seven thirty. Classes start at eight. We have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. I go home at four.
我七点起床。七点半去上学。八点开始上课。我们上午有四节课，下午有两节课。我四点回家。
✍️点评：使用时间表达（at + 时间点）描述日常作息。重点结构：get up, go to school, classes start，适合写“我的一天”类作文。
6. 我的学校
My school has a big playground. We have PE class there. I like running and jumping. We also have a music room. We sing songs every Friday.
我的学校有一个大操场。我们在那里上体育课。我喜欢跑步和跳跃。我们还有一个音乐室。我们每星期五唱歌。
✍️点评：聚焦学校设施与活动，使用 like doing 表达兴趣。重点短语：have PE class, like running, every Friday，可灵活替换。
7. 我的学校
My classroom is on the second floor. It has twenty desks and chairs. There is a blackboard and a TV. We draw pictures and read books every day.
我的教室在二楼。它有二十张课桌和椅子。有一块黑板和一台电视。我们每天画画和读书。
✍️点评：描述教室内部，使用方位词 on the second floor 和 There is/are 结构。重点词汇：blackboard, TV, draw pictures，适合空间描写。
8. 我的学校
School is important. I learn many things here. I make friends and play games. I want to study hard and be a good student.
学校很重要。我在这里学到了很多东西。我交朋友、玩游戏。我想努力学习，成为一名好学生。
✍️点评：表达对学校价值的理解，使用 learn, make friends, study hard 等积极动词。重点句型：I want to... 表达愿望，提升作文深度。
写作要点总结
1. 常用词汇：school, classroom, teacher, friend, library, playground, subject, class, happy, fun
2. 核心句型：
- I like my school because...
- There is/are...
- My favourite subject is...
- I go to school by...
- I want to be...
3. 写作技巧：使用简单句，避免复杂语法；多用感官词（clean, bright, fun）增强画面感；结合时间、地点、人物、活动四要素，让内容更完整。
划重点：每篇英语作文都可作为模板套用，替换关键词即可写出新作文。例如将“English”换成“maths”，或将“playground”换成“library”，灵活运用是关键。