1. 我的暑假第一天
My Summer Holiday Begins
I wake up late on the first day of summer holiday. I don’t go to school today! I eat breakfast with my family. Then I play with my dog in the garden. The sun is shining and the sky is blue. I feel very happy.
我的暑假开始了
暑假第一天我起得很晚。今天不用上学！我和家人一起吃早餐，然后在花园里和我的小狗玩。阳光明媚，天空湛蓝，我感到非常开心。
✍️点评与重点：使用简单句型如“I eat...”、“I play...”非常适合小学生。关键词：wake up, play with, feel happy。注意现在时态的正确使用。
2. 去海边的一天
A Day at the Beach
Last week, I went to the beach with my parents. We swam in the sea and built a big sandcastle. I found a small crab near the rocks. It was so cute! We ate ice cream and watched the sunset. It was a fun day.
去海边的一天
上周，我和父母去了海边。我们在海里游泳，还堆了一个大沙堡。我在石头附近发现了一只小螃蟹，非常可爱！我们吃了冰淇淋，还看了日落。那是快乐的一天。
✍️点评与重点：使用过去时态（went, swam, built）描述经历。重点词汇：beach, sandcastle, sunset。句型“I found...”、“We ate...”可直接套用。
3. 和爷爷奶奶一起的夏天
Summer with Grandparents
I stayed at my grandparents’ house for one week. They live in the countryside. I fed the chickens and picked tomatoes from the garden. Grandma cooked delicious soup. I loved staying with them.
和爷爷奶奶一起的夏天
我在爷爷奶奶家住了一周。他们住在乡下。我喂了小鸡，还从菜园里摘了西红柿。奶奶做了美味的汤。我很喜欢和他们在一起。
✍️点评与重点：“stayed”、“fed”、“picked”都是规则动词过去式，适合练习。关键词：countryside, delicious, garden。表达情感用“I loved...”很自然。
4. 参加夏令营
My Summer Camp
I joined a summer camp with my friends. We played games, sang songs, and made new friends. At night, we sat around a campfire and told stories. I was a little scared but also excited.
我的夏令营
我和朋友们参加了一个夏令营。我们玩游戏、唱歌，还交了新朋友。晚上，我们围坐在篝火旁讲故事。我有点害怕，但也很兴奋。
✍️点评与重点：动词短语如“joined a camp”、“played games”、“told stories”实用性强。注意并列句的使用（but also excited），增强表达力。
5. 看一场电影
Watching a Movie
On a rainy day, my sister and I watched a cartoon at home. The movie was about a brave little cat. It saved its friends from a big dog. We laughed a lot and ate popcorn. I liked the movie very much.
看一场电影
在一个下雨天，我和妹妹在家看了一部动画片。这部电影讲的是一只勇敢的小猫，它把朋友们从一只大狗那里救了出来。我们笑得很开心，还吃了爆米花。我非常喜欢这部电影。
✍️点评与重点：使用“was about”介绍电影内容，句型“I liked... very much”表达喜好。关键词：cartoon, brave, laughed。适合模仿写观后感。
6. 帮妈妈做家务
Helping My Mom
One morning, I helped my mom clean the house. I swept the floor and washed the dishes. Mom said I was a good helper. I felt proud of myself.
帮妈妈做家务
一天早上，我帮妈妈打扫房子。我扫了地，还洗了碗。妈妈说我是个好帮手。我为自己感到骄傲。
✍️点评与重点：动词swept和washed是规则过去式，易掌握。“felt proud”是表达自豪的常用短语，适合积累。
7. 一次骑自行车的经历
Riding My Bike
I rode my bike to the park with my brother. We saw ducks in the lake and fed them bread. I fell once, but I was not hurt. Riding a bike is fun and good exercise.
一次骑自行车的经历
我和哥哥骑自行车去了公园。我们看到湖里有鸭子，还喂它们面包。我摔了一次，但没有受伤。骑自行车很有趣，也是很好的锻炼。
✍️点评与重点：“rode”、“saw”、“fed”都是不规则动词过去式，需重点记忆。句型“It is fun and good exercise”可用于描述活动优点。
8. 学习游泳
Learning to Swim
This summer, I learned to swim at the pool. At first, I was afraid of water. But my teacher helped me. Now I can swim like a fish! I practice every weekend.
学习游泳
今年夏天，我在游泳池学习游泳。一开始，我害怕水。但我的老师帮助了我。现在我能像鱼一样游泳了！我每个周末都练习。
✍️点评与重点：“learned to swim”、“afraid of”、“can swim”结构清晰。比喻“like a fish”生动有趣，可提升作文亮点。
9. 读一本有趣的书
Reading a Fun Book
I read a funny storybook during the holiday. It was about a monkey who loved bananas. He went on a trip and met many animals. I read it every night before bed. Books are my best friends.
读一本有趣的书
假期里我读了一本有趣的童话书。它讲的是一只爱吃香蕉的猴子。他去旅行，遇到了很多动物。我每天晚上睡觉前都读这本书。书是我最好的朋友。
✍️点评与重点：“read a storybook”、“went on a trip”、“met animals”句型通用。“Books are my best friends”是情感升华句，值得背诵。
10. 暑假结束的感受
End of Summer Holiday
My summer holiday is almost over. I played a lot and learned many new things. I will go back to school next week. I am happy and ready for school!
暑假结束的感受
我的暑假快结束了。我玩得很开心，也学到了很多新东西。下周我就要回学校了。我很开心，也准备好上学了！
✍️点评与重点：“is almost over”、“will go back”、“ready for”都是实用表达。结尾积极向上，适合用于作文收尾。