【篇1】My Little Dog 我的小狗
I have a little dog. His name is Bobby. He is brown and white. He has big eyes and a small tail. Bobby likes to run and play with me. Every day after school, I play with him in the yard. He barks when he sees strangers. I love my dog very much. He is my best friend.
我有一只小狗。他的名字叫Bobby。他是棕色和白色的。他有大大的眼睛和一条小尾巴。Bobby喜欢跑和跟我一起玩。每天放学后，我都在院子里和他玩。他看到陌生人会叫。我非常爱我的狗。他是我最好的朋友。
✏️点评与重点：使用了简单句型如“I have...”、“He is...”、“He likes...”，适合小学生模仿。关键词：dog, play, friend。情感表达自然，适合初学者。
【篇2】My Cat 我的猫咪
I have a cat. Her name is Mimi. She is all black and very cute. Mimi likes to sleep on my bed. She also likes to play with a ball of yarn. When I come home, she runs to me and meows. I give her food and she purrs. I feel happy when I see her.
我有一只猫。她的名字叫Mimi。她全身黑色，非常可爱。Mimi喜欢睡在我的床上。她也喜欢玩毛线球。当我回家时，她跑过来喵喵叫。我给她食物，她就发出呼噜声。看到她时，我感到很开心。
✏️点评与重点：使用了感官动词如“meows”、“purrs”，增强了情感表达。句型“I feel...”帮助孩子表达情绪。重点词汇：cat, sleep, happy。
【篇3】My Hamster 我的仓鼠
I got a hamster last month. His name is Tiny. He is very small and yellow. Tiny lives in a cage with a wheel. He runs on the wheel every night. I give him carrots and water every day. He is quiet and clean. I like to watch him eat. He is a lovely pet.
上个月我得到了一只仓鼠。他的名字叫Tiny。他非常小，是黄色的。Tiny住在带轮子的笼子里。他每天晚上都在轮子上跑。我每天给他胡萝卜和水。他很安静也很干净。我喜欢看他吃东西。他是一只可爱的宠物。
✏️点评与重点：时间词“last month”、“every day”帮助构建时间线。动词“runs”、“give”、“watch”简单实用。适合练习日常活动描述。
【篇4】My Little Bird 我的小鸟
I have a little bird. Her name is Lucy. She is blue and white. Lucy sings every morning. I open the window and she flies in circles. She likes to eat seeds. I talk to her and she chirps back. I think she understands me. I take care of her every day.
我有一只小鸟。她的名字叫Lucy。她是蓝色和白色的。Lucy每天早上都会唱歌。我打开窗户，她就在空中飞圈。她喜欢吃种子。我和她说话，她就叽叽喳喳地回应。我觉得她能听懂我。我每天都照顾她。
✏️点评与重点：使用拟声词“chirps”增强画面感。句型“I think...”引导孩子表达想法。重点词：sing, fly, care。适合表达关爱与互动。
【篇5】My Turtle 我的乌龟
My turtle’s name is Tom. He is green and slow. Tom lives in a small tank with water. He likes to swim and rest on a rock. I feed him vegetables twice a day. He doesn’t make noise, but I still love him. He is very calm and funny to watch.
我的乌龟叫Tom。他是绿色的，动作很慢。Tom住在有水的小缸里。他喜欢游泳，也喜欢在石头上休息。我一天喂他两次蔬菜。他不发出声音，但我仍然爱他。他非常安静，看他也挺有趣的。
✏️点评与重点：形容词“slow”、“calm”、“funny”帮助描述性格特点。对比句“I still love him”体现情感深度。适合学习描述安静宠物。
【篇6】My Pet Fish 我的宠物鱼
I have five fish in a fish tank. Their names are Red, Blue, Gold, Black, and Silver. They swim fast and look very beautiful. I feed them every morning. I clean the tank once a week. I like to watch them swim together. They make me smile.
我的鱼缸里有五条鱼。他们的名字叫Red、Blue、Gold、Black和Silver。他们游得很快，看起来非常漂亮。我每天早上喂他们。我每周清洁一次鱼缸。我喜欢看他们一起游动。他们让我微笑。
✏️点评与重点：使用数词和颜色词练习基础词汇。动词“swim”、“feed”、“clean”贴近生活。结尾句“They make me smile”情感真挚，值得模仿。
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