1. 我的暑假第一天 My Summer Vacation Day One
I woke up late on the first day of summer vacation. I did not go to school. I played with my dog in the garden. We ran and laughed. Then I ate ice cream. It was sweet and cold. I felt very happy.
暑假的第一天我起得很晚。我没有去上学。我在花园里和我的小狗玩。我们一起跑啊笑啊。然后我吃了冰淇淋，又甜又凉。我感到非常开心。
✍️点评与重点：
使用了简单动词如 woke, played, ran, ate，适合小学生掌握。句型结构为「主语 + 动词 + 宾语」，易于模仿。重点词汇：woke up（起床），played with（和……玩），felt happy（感到开心）。
2. 去海边的一天 A Day at the Beach
Last week, I went to the beach with my family. The sun was bright. We swam in the sea and built a big sandcastle. I found a small shell. It was pink and shiny. We ate fish and chips. I love the beach!
上周，我和家人去了海边。阳光很明亮。我们在海里游泳，还建了一个大沙堡。我找到了一个小贝壳，粉红色的，闪闪发亮。我们吃了炸鱼和薯条。我爱海边！
✍️点评与重点：
时间状语 Last week 开头，帮助组织文章顺序。动词短语如 went to, swam in, built, found 都是基础动作词。重点句型：I found... It was...（我发现……它是……），适合描述物品。
3. 看电影的晚上 A Movie Night
On Saturday night, I watched a cartoon with my sister. The movie was about a brave cat. He saved his friends. We laughed a lot. Mom gave us popcorn. It was yummy. I want to watch it again.
星期六晚上，我和妹妹看了一部卡通片。这部电影讲的是一只勇敢的猫，他救了他的朋友们。我们笑得很开心。妈妈给了我们爆米花，很好吃。我想再看一遍。
✍️点评与重点：
使用了简单过去时态（watched, was, saved, gave），适合描述过去事件。重点表达：want to watch again（想再看一遍）是实用口语句型。yummy 是孩子常用词，生动自然。
4. 帮妈妈做家务 Helping Mom at Home
One morning, I helped Mom clean the house. I swept the floor and washed the plates. It was hard work, but I felt proud. Mom said, "Good job!" I smiled and drank some water.
一天早上，我帮妈妈打扫房子。我扫了地，还洗了盘子。虽然很累，但我感到很自豪。妈妈说：“干得好！”我笑了，喝了一些水。
✍️点评与重点：
动词 swept 和 washed 是规则动词过去式，适合练习语法。句型 I felt proud（我感到自豪）表达情感，提升作文层次。Good job! 是鼓励常用语，适合积累。
5. 和朋友骑自行车 Riding Bikes with Friends
On Sunday, I rode my bike with Tom and Lucy. We went to the park. We played games and sang songs. My bike is red and fast. We were tired but happy.
星期天，我和汤姆、露西一起骑自行车。我们去了公园，玩游戏、唱歌。我的自行车是红色的，很快。我们虽然累了，但很开心。
✍️点评与重点：
使用并列句（played games and sang songs）增强表达力。tired but happy 是经典对比结构，适合描写活动后的感受。ride a bike 是高频短语，必须掌握。
6. 参加夏令营 My Summer Camp
I went to a summer camp for five days. I made new friends. We slept in tents and told stories at night. I learned to swim and cook. It was fun and exciting!
我参加了一个为期五天的夏令营。我交了新朋友。我们睡在帐篷里，晚上讲鬼故事。我学会了游泳和做饭。那很有趣，也很刺激！
✍️点评与重点：
时间表达 for five days 明确活动时长。动词短语 made friends, slept in tents, told stories 都是营地常见活动。exciting 是描写体验的高级词汇，可替换 fun 使用。
7. 看星星的夜晚 Stargazing Night
Last night, I looked at the stars with my dad. The sky was dark and clear. We saw many bright stars. Dad told me the names of some. I wished on a shooting star. I hope my wish comes true.
昨晚，我和爸爸一起看星星。天空又黑又清晰。我们看到许多明亮的星星。爸爸告诉我其中一些的名字。我对着流星许了愿。我希望我的愿望能实现。
✍️点评与重点：
感官描写突出（dark and clear, bright stars），提升画面感。句型 I wished on... 是文化相关表达（许愿）。comes true（实现）是固定搭配，建议背诵。
8. 去动物园 Visit to the Zoo
I went to the zoo with my class. We saw lions, monkeys, and elephants. The monkeys jumped and played. I took photos with my tablet. The teacher said we were good students.
我和班级去了动物园。我们看到了狮子、猴子和大象。猴子跳来跳去，玩得很开心。我用平板拍了照片。老师说我们是好学生。
✍️点评与重点：
列举动物时用逗号分隔，最后用 and 连接，符合英语写作规范。jumped and played 展示动作连续性。took photos 是常用表达，适合旅游类作文。
9. 学习画画 Learning to Draw
This summer, I took a drawing class. I drew a big sun, green trees, and a blue house. My teacher liked my picture. She put it on the wall. I was very proud.
今年夏天，我参加了一个绘画班。我画了一个大太阳、绿树和蓝色的房子。老师喜欢我的画，把它贴在墙上。我非常自豪。
✍️点评与重点：
颜色词汇 sun（yellow），trees（green），house（blue）自然融入句子。put it on the wall 是具体动作，增强真实感。适合练习“被表扬”类表达。
10. 暑假结束的感受 How I Feel at the End of Summer
Summer vacation is almost over. I had so much fun. I played, traveled, and learned new things. I will miss not going to school, but I am ready for class. I hope next summer is just as good!
暑假快结束了。我玩得很开心。我玩耍、旅行，还学到了新东西。我会想念不用上学的日子，但我已经准备好上课了。我希望明年夏天也一样美好！
✍️点评与重点：
使用了总结性语言（had fun, played, traveled, learned）概括整个假期。句型 I will miss... but I am ready... 表达复杂情感，适合高年级小学生提升表达。just as good 是比较级用法，值得学习。
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