前言：为什么写英语日记？
写英语日记是提高英语写作能力的有效方法。它不仅能帮助你积累词汇，还能锻炼语法运用和时间表达能力。本文精选4篇初中水平的英语日记，每篇都配有中文翻译、重点词汇和语法解析，助你轻松掌握日常英语表达。
1. 普通上学日
June 10, 2024 Monday Sunny
I got up at 6:30 this morning. After brushing my teeth and washing my face, I had a quick breakfast of bread and milk. I left home at 7:15 and walked to school. My first class started at 8:00. We had English, math, and science in the morning. At noon, I ate lunch in the school dining hall. After school, I played basketball with my friends for half an hour. Then I went home and did my homework. I finished all my homework by 8:30. After dinner, I watched a little TV and went to bed at 9:45.
2024年6月10日 星期一 晴
今天早上我6:30起床。刷牙洗脸后，我快速吃了面包和牛奶当早餐。7:15我离开家，步行去学校。第一节课8:00开始。上午我们上了英语、数学和科学课。中午，我在学校食堂吃午饭。放学后，我和朋友们打了半小时篮球。然后我回家写作业。我8:30前完成了所有作业。晚饭后，我看了会儿电视，9:45上床睡觉。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用了多个时间表达：at 6:30, at 7:15, by 8:30, at 9:45
✅ 动词过去式准确：got up, had, left, started, played, finished, went
✅ 时间顺序清晰，适合初学者模仿
📌 重点句型：I finished all my homework by 8:30.（by 表示“在……之前”）
2. 周末家庭出游
June 15, 2024 Saturday Cloudy
Today my family and I went to the countryside. We left home at 9:00 a.m. and arrived at the farm at 10:30. The air was fresh and the sky was blue. I fed the chickens and picked strawberries. My dad took many photos. We had a picnic under a big tree at 12:15. After lunch, I rode a bike around the farm. We came back home at 5:00 p.m. I was tired but happy. What a wonderful day!
2024年6月15日 星期六 多云
今天我和家人去了乡下。我们上午9点出发，10:30到达农场。空气清新，天空湛蓝。我喂了小鸡，还摘了草莓。爸爸拍了很多照片。中午12:15，我们在一棵大树下野餐。午饭后，我骑自行车绕农场转了一圈。下午5点我们回到家。我虽然累了，但很开心。多么美好的一天啊！
点评与重点：
✅ 使用了“go to the countryside”“have a picnic”等实用短语
✅ 时间表达丰富：at 9:00 a.m., at 10:30, at 12:15, at 5:00 p.m.
✅ 情感表达自然：I was tired but happy.
📌 重点句型：We left home at 9:00 and arrived at 10:30.（并列动词过去式）
3. 生病的一天
June 5, 2024 Wednesday Rainy
I didn’t go to school today because I had a fever. I woke up at 7:00, but I felt very weak. My mom took my temperature and found I had a high fever. The doctor came at 9:15 and gave me some medicine. I stayed in bed all day. I drank a lot of water and slept for two hours in the afternoon. My friend called me at 4:00 and asked about my health. I hope I can go back to school tomorrow.
2024年6月5日 星期三 雨
今天我没有去上学，因为我发烧了。我7点醒来，但感觉非常虚弱。妈妈给我量了体温，发现我发高烧。医生9:15来了，给我开了些药。我整天都躺在床上。我喝了很多水，下午睡了两个小时。我朋友4点给我打了电话，询问我的情况。希望我明天能回学校。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用了疾病相关词汇：fever, weak, temperature, medicine
✅ 时间表达准确：at 7:00, at 9:15, in the afternoon, at 4:00
✅ 使用了原因状语从句：because I had a fever
📌 重点句型：I stayed in bed all day.（all day 表示“一整天”）
4. 特别的生日派对
June 20, 2024 Thursday Sunny
Today was my 14th birthday! My parents held a small party at home. My friends came at 6:30 p.m. We played games and sang songs. At 7:10, we cut the birthday cake. It was chocolate flavor and very delicious. My mom cooked many tasty dishes. We laughed and talked until 9:00. Then my friends gave me gifts. I was so excited. I will never forget this happy day.
2024年6月20日 星期四 晴
今天是我14岁生日！爸爸妈妈在家里为我举办了一个小型派对。我的朋友们下午6:30到了。我们一起玩游戏、唱歌。7:10，我们切了生日蛋糕。蛋糕是巧克力味的，非常美味。妈妈做了很多好吃的菜。我们一直说笑到9点。然后朋友们送了我礼物。我非常激动。我永远不会忘记这个快乐的日子。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用了生日相关词汇：birthday, cake, gifts, party
✅ 时间表达具体：at 6:30 p.m., at 7:10, until 9:00
✅ 情感表达强烈：I was so excited, I will never forget…
📌 重点句型：We laughed and talked until 9:00.（until 表示“直到……为止”）
写作小贴士：时间表达与语法总结
📌 1. 时间表达方式：
- at + 具体时间（at 8:00, at 9:15）
- in the morning/afternoon/evening
- on + 星期（on Monday）
- by + 时间（表示“在……之前”）
- until + 时间（表示“直到……”）
📌 2. 动词时态：
日记通常使用一般过去时，注意动词过去式变化，如：
go → went, have → had, take → took, eat → ate
📌 3. 日记格式：
日期 + 星期 + 天气（如：June 10, 2024 Monday Sunny）
首字母大写，标点规范，段落清晰
📌 4. 提升表达：
适当使用连接词：and, but, after, then, because
加入情感表达：I was happy/tired/excited