1. 自我介绍类作文:Myself(自我介绍)
English Version:
My name is Li Hua. I am 13 years old and I study in Grade 8 at a middle school. I am friendly and hard-working. In my free time, I like reading books and playing basketball. My favorite subject is English because it is interesting and useful. I want to be a teacher when I grow up. I hope to make friends with everyone.
中文翻译:
我叫李华,今年13岁,在一所中学读八年级。我性格友好,学习勤奋。课余时间我喜欢读书和打篮球。我最喜欢的科目是英语,因为它有趣又实用。长大后我想当一名老师。我希望和大家成为朋友。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用简单句式,适合初中生水平。
• 包含基本信息:姓名、年龄、年级、性格、爱好、理想。
• 重点词汇:friendly(友好的),hard-working(勤奋的),in my free time(在空闲时间),grow up(长大)。
• 可套用模板结构介绍自己。
2. 我的学校生活:My School Life
English Version:
I enjoy my school life very much. I have seven classes every day. My favorite subject is science because I love doing experiments. I also like my English teacher. She is kind and always helps us. After school, I often play football with my classmates. We have a great time together. I think school is not only for learning but also for making friends.
中文翻译:
我非常享受我的学校生活。我每天有七节课。我最喜欢的科目是科学,因为我喜欢做实验。我也喜欢我的英语老师,她很和蔼,总是帮助我们。放学后,我经常和同学踢足球,我们在一起玩得很开心。我认为学校不仅是学习的地方,也是交朋友的地方。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用现在时态描述日常。
• 加入具体细节(如科目、活动)增强真实感。
• 重点句型:I enjoy... very much. / I think... / after school...
• 可用于“校园生活”类话题。
3. 我的假期计划:My Holiday Plan
English Version:
This summer, I am going to visit my grandparents in the countryside. I will stay there for two weeks. I plan to help them with farm work and go fishing by the river. I also want to read some books and practice my English. I believe it will be a relaxing and meaningful holiday.
中文翻译:
今年夏天,我打算去乡下看望我的爷爷奶奶。我会在那里待两周。我计划帮他们干农活,去河边钓鱼。我还想读一些书,练习英语。我相信这将是一个轻松而有意义的假期。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用将来时(be going to)表达计划。
• 动词短语:help with, go fishing, practice English。
• 亮点词汇:relaxing(放松的),meaningful(有意义的)。
• 适合“假期安排”类写作。
4. 我最喜欢的动物:My Favorite Animal
English Version:
My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are cute and shy. They live in China and like eating bamboo. I saw a real panda at the zoo last year. It was so lovely that I took many photos. I hope more people can protect animals like pandas.
中文翻译:
我最喜欢的动物是熊猫。熊猫很可爱,也很害羞。它们生活在中国,喜欢吃竹子。去年我在动物园看到了真正的熊猫,它太可爱了,我拍了很多照片。我希望更多人能保护像熊猫这样的动物。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用形容词描述动物特征(cute, shy)。
• 加入个人经历增加感染力。
• 重点句型:My favorite animal is... / I hope...
• 可用于“动物保护”话题延伸。
5. 一次难忘的经历:An Unforgettable Experience
English Version:
Last month, I took part in a school speech competition. I was very nervous at first, but I practiced hard. When I stood on the stage, I remembered all my words and spoke clearly. I won the second prize! It was an unforgettable experience because I learned to be brave.
中文翻译:
上个月,我参加了学校的演讲比赛。一开始我很紧张,但我努力练习。当我站在舞台上时,我记起了所有内容,清晰地讲了出来。我获得了二等奖!这是一次难忘的经历,因为我学会了勇敢。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用过去时描述事件。
• 情感变化(nervous → brave)体现成长。
• 关键词汇:nervous(紧张的),clearly(清晰地),brave(勇敢的)。
• 适合“成长类”作文。

6. 我的家乡:My Hometown
English Version:
My hometown is a small town with clean air and green trees. There is a river running through it. In spring, flowers bloom and the weather is warm. People here are friendly and helpful. I love my hometown because it is quiet and beautiful.
中文翻译:
我的家乡是一个空气清新、绿树成荫的小镇。一条河流穿过小镇。春天,花儿盛开,天气温暖。这里的人们友好又乐于助人。我爱我的家乡,因为它安静而美丽。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用there is / are 描述环境。
• 加入季节描写,增强画面感。
• 亮点词汇:clean air(清新的空气),bloom(开花),quiet(安静的)。
• 适合“地点描写”类作文。
7. 我的好朋友:My Best Friend
English Version:
My best friend is Wang Lin. She is kind and funny. We are in the same class and always help each other. After school, we walk home together and talk about our day. I like her because she makes me laugh and never gives up.
中文翻译:
我最好的朋友是王琳。她善良又幽默。我们在同一个班级,总是互相帮助。放学后,我们一起走回家,聊聊一天的事情。我喜欢她,因为她让我开心,而且从不放弃。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用形容词描述人物性格。
• 使用并列句(and)连接多个信息。
• 重点句型:My best friend is... / I like her because...
• 适合“人物描写”类写作。
8. 我的梦想:My Dream
English Version:
My dream is to become a doctor. I want to help sick people and make them feel better. To make my dream come true, I will study hard and learn more about science. I know it is not easy, but I will never give up.
中文翻译:
我的梦想是成为一名医生。我想帮助生病的人,让他们感觉好起来。为了实现梦想,我会努力学习,了解更多科学知识。我知道这不容易,但我永远不会放弃。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用“to become...”表达职业理想。
• 加入努力方式,体现决心。
• 关键词句:My dream is to... / make my dream come true / never give up.
• 激励性强,适合演讲类作文。
9. 保护环境:Protecting the Environment
English Version:
Now, pollution is a big problem. We should do something to protect the environment. We can save water, plant more trees, and stop using plastic bags. If everyone does a small thing, the world will become cleaner and greener. Let’s start from today!
中文翻译:
现在,污染是一个大问题。我们应该做些事情来保护环境。我们可以节约用水、多种树、不再使用塑料袋。如果每个人都做一点小事,世界就会变得更干净、更绿。让我们从今天开始吧!
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用情态动词 should 表达建议。
• 使用祈使句呼吁行动(Let’s...)。
• 环保词汇:pollution(污染),save water(节约用水),plastic bags(塑料袋)。
• 适合倡议类作文。
10. 一次助人经历:A Helping Experience
English Version:
Last Sunday, I saw an old man crossing the street slowly. He looked worried. I went up and asked, ‘Can I help you?’ He said yes. I helped him cross the road safely. He smiled and said ‘Thank you.’ I felt happy because I did something good.
中文翻译:
上周日,我看到一位老人慢慢地过马路,看起来很担心。我走过去问:“需要帮忙吗?”他说可以。我帮助他安全地过了马路。他微笑着对我说“谢谢”。我感到很开心,因为我做了一件好事。
✍️点评与重点:
• 使用对话增强真实感。
• 情感描写(felt happy)体现正能量。
• 重点句型:Can I help you? / I felt happy because...
• 适合“美德类”作文主题。