1.春天——美丽的季节
Spring - The Beautiful Season
Spring is my favorite season. The weather is warm and sunny. Flowers bloom and trees turn green. Birds sing in the trees. I like to fly a kite in the park. Sometimes it rains, but the rain is light and gentle. After the rain, the air is fresh and clean. I love spring because everything is new and happy.
☑️中文翻译：
春天是我最喜欢的季节。天气温暖又晴朗。花儿开放，树木变绿。鸟儿在树上唱歌。我喜欢在公园里放风筝。有时会下雨，但雨很轻很柔和。雨后空气清新干净。我喜欢春天，因为一切都焕然一新，充满快乐。
☑️点评与重点：
这篇作文使用了简单句和常见词汇，如“warm”“sunny”“bloom”“fly a kite”，非常适合小学生模仿。重点句型：“I like...”“I love...”表达个人喜好，是写作中的高频结构。关键词汇加粗记忆：bloom（开花），fresh（清新的），gentle（轻柔的）。
2. 阳光下的夏日乐趣
Summer Fun in the Sun
Summer is hot and bright. The sun shines every day. I wear a hat and a T-shirt. I like to swim in the pool or eat ice cream. Sometimes there are thunderstorms. The sky turns dark and it rains hard. But after the storm, the sky is blue again. I enjoy summer because I have a long holiday and can play outside.
☑️中文翻译：
夏天又热又明亮。太阳每天照耀。我戴着帽子，穿着T恤。我喜欢在游泳池游泳或吃冰淇淋。有时会有雷雨。天空变黑，雨下得很大。但暴风雨过后，天空又变蓝了。我喜欢夏天，因为我有长长的假期，可以在外面玩耍。
☑️点评与重点：
使用了描述天气的形容词如“hot”“bright”“dark”“blue”，并加入了日常活动“swim”“eat ice cream”，内容生动。注意连词“but”转折句的使用，增强逻辑性。重点句型：“I like to...”“Sometimes...”可用于多种主题作文。
3. 秋叶飘落
Autumn Leaves Falling Down
Autumn is cool and windy. The leaves on the trees turn yellow, orange, and red. They fall down and make a colorful carpet on the ground. I like to walk in the park and jump into the leaf piles. Farmers are busy harvesting crops. The sky is often clear and the air is fresh. I think autumn is a quiet and beautiful season.
☑️中文翻译：
秋天凉爽又多风。树上的叶子变成黄色、橙色和红色。它们飘落下来，在地上形成五彩缤纷的地毯。我喜欢在公园散步，跳进落叶堆里。农民们正忙着收割庄稼。天空常常很晴朗，空气清新。我觉得秋天是一个安静而美丽的季节。
☑️点评与重点：
本篇运用了颜色词汇（yellow, orange, red）和感官描写（windy, fresh, quiet），增强画面感。动词“fall down”“jump into”生动形象。重点句型：“I think...”表达观点，适合结尾总结。词汇拓展：harvest（收获），crop（庄稼）。
4. 冬日冰雪与乐趣
Winter Snow and Fun
Winter is cold and snowy. I wear a coat, gloves, and a scarf. Sometimes it snows, and the world turns white. I like to make a snowman or have a snowball fight with my friends. On cold days, I drink hot chocolate and stay near the heater. The days are short and the nights are long. I love winter because of the New Year and Christmas.
☑️中文翻译：
冬天寒冷多雪。我穿着外套、戴着手套和围巾。有时下雪，整个世界变成白色。我喜欢堆雪人，或和朋友们打雪仗。在寒冷的日子里，我喝热巧克力，待在暖气旁。白天短，夜晚长。我喜欢冬天，因为有新年和圣诞节。
☑️点评与重点：
本段突出冬季特征词汇：“snowy”“cold”“snowman”“snowball fight”，并加入节日元素，使内容更丰富。注意使用并列句：“I wear... and...”“The days are short and the nights are long.” 重点表达节日情感：“I love... because of...” 可用于情感类写作。
5. 一年四季
The Four Seasons of the Year
There are four seasons in a year: spring, summer, autumn, and winter. Each season is different. Spring is warm and full of life. Summer is hot and sunny. We can swim and eat ice cream. Autumn is cool and colorful. Leaves fall from the trees. Winter is cold and snowy. We wear warm clothes and play in the snow. I like all the seasons because each one is special.
☑️中文翻译：
一年有四个季节：春、夏、秋、冬。每个季节都不同。春天温暖，充满生机。夏天炎热晴朗，我们可以游泳、吃冰淇淋。秋天凉爽多彩，树叶从树上落下。冬天寒冷多雪，我们穿暖和的衣服，在雪中玩耍。我喜欢所有的季节，因为每一个都很特别。
☑️点评与重点：
这是一篇总结性范文，结构清晰：总—分—总。开头点明主题，中间分述四季，结尾总结感受。适合考试中“描述四季”类题目。重点句型：“There are...”“Each season is...”“I like... because...” 是写作万能句式。建议背诵整篇，灵活套用。
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