【篇1】最简单的介绍
My Best Friend
My best friend is Lily. She is ten years old. She has long black hair and big eyes. She is kind and funny. We go to the same school. We like to play games together. After school, we often read books or draw pictures. I like her very much.
我最好的朋友
我最好的朋友是莉莉。她十岁了。她有长长的黑发和大大的眼睛。她很善良，也很有趣。我们在同一所学校上学。我们喜欢一起玩游戏。放学后，我们经常一起读书或画画。我非常喜欢她。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用了基础词汇如 "best friend", "kind", "play games"，适合初学者。
✅ 句型结构简单：主语 + 动词 + 宾语，易于模仿。
📌 重点句型：She is kind and funny.（描述性格）
【篇2】加入兴趣爱好
My Good Friend Tom
Tom is my good friend. He is nine years old. He likes playing football and riding a bike. He is good at math. We sit next to each other in class. He always helps me with homework. We laugh a lot. I am happy to have him as a friend.
我的好朋友汤姆
汤姆是我的好朋友。他九岁了。他喜欢踢足球和骑自行车。他数学很好。我们在课堂上坐在一起。他总是帮我做作业。我们经常一起笑。我很高兴有他这样的朋友。
点评与重点：
✅ 引入兴趣爱好表达：He likes playing...
✅ 使用了常见动词短语：help with homework, sit next to。
📌 重点句型：I am happy to have him as a friend.（表达友情）
【篇3】描述外貌与性格
My Friend Anna
Anna is my classmate and best friend. She has short brown hair and a bright smile. She is very friendly and always says "hello" to everyone. She loves animals and has a small dog. Her dog's name is Coco. We often walk the dog together on weekends.
我的朋友安娜
安娜是我的同班同学，也是我最好的朋友。她有短短的棕色头发和灿烂的笑容。她非常友好，总是跟每个人说“你好”。她喜欢动物，养了一只小狗。她的狗叫可可。我们经常在周末一起遛狗。
点评与重点：
✅ 描述外貌：short brown hair, bright smile。
✅ 使用现在时态描述日常行为。
📌 重点句型：She is very friendly and always says "hello" to everyone.（突出性格特点）
【篇4】一起度过的快乐时光
My Best Friend Jack
Jack is my best friend. We live near each other. On Saturdays, we ride bikes in the park. We also play with toy cars and watch cartoons. Last weekend, we had a picnic with our parents. We ate sandwiches and fruit. It was so much fun! I love spending time with Jack.
我最好的朋友杰克
杰克是我最好的朋友。我们住得很近。每逢星期六，我们就在公园里骑自行车。我们还一起玩玩具车、看动画片。上个周末，我们和父母一起去野餐。我们吃了三明治和水果。真是太有趣了！我喜欢和杰克一起玩。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用时间状语：on Saturdays, last weekend，增强叙述感。
✅ 加入过去时态：had a picnic, ate sandwiches。
📌 重点句型：It was so much fun!（表达感受）
【篇5】表达感激之情
My Friend Emma
Emma is my best friend. She is smart and helpful. When I was sick, she called me and said, "Get well soon!" She also sent me a cute card. I felt happy and better. Friends like Emma make life beautiful. I am thankful for her friendship.
我的朋友艾玛
艾玛是我最好的朋友。她聪明又乐于助人。当我生病时，她打电话给我，说：“早日康复！”她还给我寄了一张可爱的卡片。我感到很开心，身体也好得更快了。像艾玛这样的朋友让生活变得更美好。我很感激她的友谊。
点评与重点：
✅ 使用情感表达：I felt happy, I am thankful。
✅ 展现友情的温暖行为：called me, sent a card。
📌 重点句型：Friends like Emma make life beautiful.（升华主题）
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