1. 基础版自我介绍(适合一年级)
My name is Lily. I am 7 years old. I am a girl. I am in Grade 2. My favorite color is pink. I like cats. I like to draw pictures. I am happy to be in this class. Please be my friend!
🍭中文翻译:我叫莉莉,今年7岁。我是个女孩,上二年级。我最喜欢的颜色是粉色。我喜欢猫,也喜欢画画。我很高兴能在这个班级,希望大家和我做朋友!
✍️点评与重点:这篇作文使用了最基础的句型,如“I am...”和“I like...”,适合刚学英语的小学生。关键词汇有:name, age, grade, favorite color, like。句式简单重复,易于记忆和模仿。
2. 加入兴趣爱好的自我介绍
Hi! My name is Tom. I am 8 years old. I am in Grade 3. I like playing football and riding my bike. On weekends, I play with my friends. I also like English class. My teacher is kind. I want to learn more words. Nice to meet you!
🍭中文翻译:嗨!我叫汤姆,今年8岁,上三年级。我喜欢踢足球和骑自行车。周末时,我和朋友们一起玩。我也喜欢英语课,我的老师很和蔼。我想学更多单词。很高兴认识你们!
✍️点评与重点:本篇加入了具体爱好和日常活动,使用了“On weekends...”和“I want to...”等实用句型。重点词汇:playing football, riding my bike, kind, learn more words。适合想表达更多内容的学生。

3. 包含家庭信息的自我介绍
Hello! I’m Amy. I’m 9 years old. I have a brother and a sister. I live with my parents. I’m in Grade 4. I like reading books and listening to music. My favorite animal is the panda. I love China. I hope we can be good friends!
🍭中文翻译:大家好!我是艾米,今年9岁。我有一个哥哥和一个妹妹,和父母住在一起。我现在上四年级。我喜欢读书和听音乐。我最喜欢的动物是熊猫,我热爱中国。希望我们能成为好朋友!
✍️点评与重点:这篇作文加入了家庭成员和居住情况,拓展了表达内容。“I have...”和“I live with...”是描述家庭的常用句型。重点词:brother, sister, parents, reading books, listening to music。有助于提升表达的丰富性。
4. 表达梦想的自我介绍
Hi, everyone! My name is Jack. I am 10 years old. I am in Grade 5. I like science and math. I want to be a scientist one day. I love doing experiments. I also like playing the piano. Thank you for listening to me!
🍭中文翻译:大家好!我叫杰克,今年10岁,上五年级。我喜欢科学和数学,将来想成为一名科学家。我喜欢做实验,也喜欢弹钢琴。谢谢大家听我介绍!
✍️点评与重点:本篇引入了“梦想职业”的表达,“I want to be a...”是表达志向的核心句型。关键词:scientist, experiments, playing the piano。适合高年级学生使用,提升语言层次。
5. 可爱风自我介绍(适合女生)
Hi! I’m Lucy. I’m 8 years old. I’m in Grade 3. I have long hair and big eyes. I like pink dresses and cute animals. My favorite subject is art. I can draw flowers and cats. I’m shy, but I’m kind. Let’s play together!
🍭中文翻译:嗨!我是露西,今年8岁,上三年级。我有长头发和大眼睛。我喜欢粉色的裙子和可爱的动物。我最喜欢的科目是美术,我会画花和猫。我有点害羞,但我很友善。我们一起玩吧!
✍️点评与重点:这篇作文加入了外貌描写和性格特点,使用了“can”表达能力,“I’m shy, but...”展示性格对比。重点词:long hair, big eyes, cute animals, can draw。语言生动,适合性格活泼的学生参考。