1. 我的暑假第一天
My Summer Holiday - Day One
I woke up late on the first day of summer holiday. I did not go to school. I ate breakfast with my family. Then I played with my dog in the garden. The sun was shining. It was a happy day.
我的暑假第一天
暑假第一天我起得很晚。那天不用上学。我和家人一起吃了早餐，然后在花园里和我的小狗玩耍。阳光明媚，真是快乐的一天。
✍️老师点评：句子结构简单，使用了过去时态（woke, ate, played），适合初学者模仿。重点词汇：waked up, played with, garden。
2. 去海边的一天
A Day at the Beach
Last week, I went to the beach with my parents. We swam in the sea and built a sandcastle. I found a small shell. It was blue and white. I took it home. I like the beach very much.
去海边的一天
上周，我和父母去了海边。我们在海里游泳，还堆了一个沙堡。我捡到了一个小贝壳，是蓝白相间的。我把它带回了家。我非常喜欢海边。
✍️老师点评：使用了常见动词（went, swam, built, found），内容生动。重点短语：went to the beach, built a sandcastle, found a shell。
3. 看电影的晚上
A Movie Night
On Saturday night, I watched a cartoon with my sister. The movie was funny. We ate popcorn and laughed a lot. After the movie, we talked about the story. I want to watch it again.
看电影的晚上
周六晚上，我和妹妹看了一部动画片。电影很有趣，我们吃了爆米花，笑得很开心。电影结束后，我们还聊了剧情。我想再看一遍。
✍️老师点评：使用了日常活动词汇（watched, ate, laughed），适合描述休闲生活。重点句型：I want to... 表达愿望。
4. 帮妈妈做家务
Helping Mom at Home
One morning, I helped my mom clean the house. I swept the floor and washed the dishes. Mom said I was a good helper. I felt very proud.
帮妈妈做家务
一天早上，我帮妈妈打扫房子。我扫了地，还洗了碗。妈妈说我是个好帮手，我感到非常自豪。
✍️老师点评：使用了动词过去式（helped, swept, washed），体现责任感。重点表达：felt proud（感到自豪）是情感描写的好句型。
5. 和朋友一起骑自行车
Riding Bikes with Friends
Yesterday, I rode my bike with my best friend. We went to the park. We played games and had a picnic. The weather was nice. We were very happy.
和朋友一起骑自行车
昨天，我和最好的朋友一起骑自行车去了公园。我们玩游戏，还野餐了。天气很好，我们非常开心。
✍️老师点评：使用了并列句（We played... and had...），增强表达力。重点词汇：rode bikes, had a picnic, best friend。
6. 参加夏令营
My Summer Camp
I went to a summer camp last month. I met new friends. We sang songs, played games, and slept in a tent. I learned how to make a fire. It was exciting!
我的夏令营
上个月我参加了夏令营。我认识了新朋友，我们一起唱歌、玩游戏，还住在帐篷里。我学会了生火，真是太刺激了！
✍️老师点评：使用了动词原形（sing, play, sleep）的过去式，内容丰富。重点句型：I learned how to... 表达学习新技能。
7. 看爷爷种菜
Watching Grandpa Grow Vegetables
I visited my grandpa in the countryside. He grows tomatoes, carrots, and beans. I helped him water the plants. I like fresh vegetables from the garden.
看爷爷种菜
我去了乡下看爷爷。他种了西红柿、胡萝卜和豆子。我帮他给植物浇水。我喜欢从菜园里摘的新鲜蔬菜。
✍️老师点评：使用了具体名词（tomatoes, carrots），增强画面感。重点动词：grow, water，适合描述农业活动。
8. 读一本有趣的书
Reading an Interesting Book
On a rainy day, I stayed at home and read a storybook. The story was about a brave mouse. He saved his friends from a cat. I liked the ending very much.
读一本有趣的书
下雨天，我待在家里读了一本故事书。故事讲的是一只勇敢的小老鼠，他把朋友们从猫的手里救了出来。我非常喜欢这个结局。
✍️老师点评：使用了过去时描述故事情节，适合练习叙述能力。重点句型：The story was about... 介绍故事主题。
9. 去动物园
My Trip to the Zoo
Last Sunday, I went to the zoo with my class. We saw lions, monkeys, and elephants. My favorite animal is the panda. It was eating bamboo. It looked very cute.
去动物园
上个星期天，我和班级一起去动物园。我们看到了狮子、猴子和大象。我最喜欢的动物是熊猫，它正在吃竹子，看起来非常可爱。
✍️老师点评：使用了常见动物名称和现在进行时（was eating），练习描述场景。重点表达：My favorite animal is... 是经典句型。
10. 暑假结束的感想
How I Felt at the End of Summer
Today is the last day of summer holiday. I am happy and sad. I had fun, but I will miss playing all day. Tomorrow, school starts again. I will try my best!
暑假结束的感想
今天是暑假的最后一天。我又开心又有点难过。我玩得很开心，但会想念整天玩耍的日子。明天就要开学了，我会继续努力的！
✍️老师点评：情感表达真实，使用了并列形容词（happy and sad）。重点句型：I will try my best! 鼓励自己，积极向上。